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message 1: by Richard, Mind of Sanity (new)

Richard (ddaythecannibal) | 3078 comments Mod
Choose the Theme

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message 2: by Richard, Mind of Sanity (new)

Richard (ddaythecannibal) | 3078 comments Mod
This month's Chosen theme was actually DREAMS BUT because we already had a contest with that as a theme I chose the second runner up.

So the theme is PARANOIA.


message 3: by Richard, Mind of Sanity (new)

Richard (ddaythecannibal) | 3078 comments Mod
Octopus Money

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message 4: by Richard, Mind of Sanity (new)

Richard (ddaythecannibal) | 3078 comments Mod
I'm just posting this to make it appear before September's.


message 5: by Richard, Mind of Sanity (new)

Richard (ddaythecannibal) | 3078 comments Mod
PARANOIA!!!


message 6: by Nate (new)

Nate I'm NOT paranoid!...wait you're one of them aren't you?!


message 7: by Richard, Mind of Sanity (last edited Aug 03, 2012 03:26PM) (new)

Richard (ddaythecannibal) | 3078 comments Mod
No... Are YOU one of them? Who sent you?


message 8: by Nate (new)

Nate Me? ...one of who? WHO's asking?...*Looks over shoulder*

ok enough of that


message 9: by Richard, Mind of Sanity (new)

Richard (ddaythecannibal) | 3078 comments Mod
Seconded...

I dunno why but I have to put this up...

Paranoid by Black Sabbath

Finished with my woman 'cause she couldn't help me with my mind
people think I'm insane because I am frowning all the time
All day long I think of things but nothing seems to satisfy
Think I'll lose my mind if I don't find something to pacify

Can you help me occupy my brain?
Oh yeah

I need someone to show me the things in life that I can't find
I can't see the things that make true happiness, I must be blind

Make a joke and I will sigh and you will laugh and I will cry
Happiness I cannot feel and love to me is so unreal

And so as you hear these words telling you now of my state
I tell you to enjoy life I wish I could but it's too late


message 10: by Nate (new)

Nate I actually tried writing a poem the other day...dunno why it kinda came to me. It kinda fits this theme...though it sucks arse.


message 11: by Richard, Mind of Sanity (new)

Richard (ddaythecannibal) | 3078 comments Mod
SOOOOO? ENTER IT!!!!

Plus do you have any idea how many of my poems I can't stand?


message 12: by Richard, Mind of Sanity (new)

Richard (ddaythecannibal) | 3078 comments Mod
P-A-R-A-N-I-O-A


message 13: by Jo (new)

Jo | 2 comments Melancholy



Abandoned,

cornered,

braced in a corner

blank eyes

narrow

kiss-and-tell

lips draw tight

heart

pumps out-of-order,

veins pulse a staccato rhythm .

wake

from a drugged slumber,

a nightmare beside you in bed

traverse a grey quarry,

torn bloodied flesh

suspended from

grimy streaked feet,

scramble a muddy embankment,

slip,

land face down in the earth,

muck in your nose

mouth full of mire

suck hard,

fast,

seek liberation

***

An older one of mine but I hope it fits


message 14: by . (new)

. | 10 comments Ghost Of You


temperature drops
can feel your breath on my lips
the slightest adjustment of your hips
gone so fast
like it never was
never was
I steel my spine
to a truth I can’t deny
breathe in deep
close my eyes
slip away to clear my mind
let certainty take root
you’re not here
not here
just a figment
a cruel creation
dream that walks the line
balancing between reason and lunacy
lunacy
carefully testing my grip on reality
air still so thick
with a you that does not exist
did you ever?..
I’d once have sworn you did
now…my confidence wavers
wavers
as the emptiness envelops me


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