Writing Help-Group For Everyone discussion

Hello, peeps! ^-^
Well, I have finished my homework, but..... I need to choose a medieval aspect of the medieval era like Crime and Punishment, Archery, or something like those ( I was originally gonna do Crime ad Punishment, but almost everyone is doing that, I think! -.-)
I also need to create an 'artefact' that ties into the lesson-Speak thing. I have had this assignment for two weeks now and my mind is STILL blank. Any ideas?

The roles of women durring that era would be an interesting topic. Or perhaps delving into the realm of the people of that time's superstitions...

I totally forgot about superstiscous folk. That seems lIke a better option! I just have to ask mr b if it is ok, though. If not, then I'll do the other 1... ^-^

Thankyou^^

That's what I'm here for.... mostly.

Lol. :P

Hey, I blurted out in class when the teacher asked me what i was doing for the subject, and i wasn't listening to the question, so I said " Church?" and he asked me what artefact I was making to represent the point of my sose assignment. Which means, now I am stuck doing the church.. -_-

So anyway! I just wanted your opinion on the first bit I've written so far:
Today I am doing my speech on how in the Medieval Ages the church was one of the most powerful influential aspects of the medieval ages. The church was in charge of all court issues that weren’t about authority, meaning they could condemn who they wish to imprisonment or death. During the Medieval ages, the Church held most of the power, as well as 1/3 of every part of Europe.

Is it any good? *asks anyone willing to give opinion*

Sounds alright, save for a few grammar points:

'Today I am doing my speech on how in the Medieval Ages the church was one of the most powerful influential aspects of the medieval ages.'

Might be better said, 'Today I am doing my speech on how in the Medieval Ages the Church was one of the most powerful -)AND(-)MOST(- influential aspects -)OF THOSE TIMES(-. Try to avoid overusing the words 'Medieval Ages.'

'The church was in charge of all court issues that weren’t about authority, meaning they could condemn who they wish to imprisonment or death. During the Medieval ages, the Church held most of the power, as well as 1/3 of every part of Europe.'

About this bit, I think you mean to say, 'They could condemn who they WISHED to imprisonment or death. Aside from those points, the rest is good.

P.S. Sorry I've been away for awhile; I had fallen Terribly ill. :(

Julius wrote: "Sounds alright, save for a few grammar points:

'Today I am doing my speech on how in the Medieval Ages the church was one of the most powerful influential aspects of the medieval ages.'

Might be ..."

Aww, poor diddums! :(
You ok now??

And thanks for the pointers. ;)

Phoebe wrote: "Julius wrote: "Sounds alright, save for a few grammar points:

'Today I am doing my speech on how in the Medieval Ages the church was one of the most powerful influential aspects of the medieval ag..."

Almost completely better, but I've still got a nasty cough. *Is suddenly cut short of speaking with Phoebe as horrid cough racks whole body* Uhg. It's a good thing I didn't just stay in bed the whole time: I would've gotten worse.

????????????????

I've been under the weather most recently, Ma'am. That's what I'm telling Phoebe about. I detest getting sick.

.............i am hungrrey

Well, eat something. Maybe a smoked ham or side of beef or talking squid.

*gags* i hate baken, well... we aint haveing lunch till 5:30pm 'cause we going to reseraunt to celebrate my brother's great hsc results!

Good for your brother then! What are some good Aussie eating places?

GPK

You are vieled in ambiguity.

????whast that mean>?

It means you're rather confusing.

oh lol..AUWESOMe!!

You like it that much, do you?

yeah ^_^ look at my name

Imagine that...

What time is it where you are?

4pm

It's 1.10Am here.

:o

i fell asleep at about 3am last night ^_^

Did you now? I like staying up late too, but I pay for it in the morning.

lol yweah me too!!!

You two enjoying yourselves there? :)

Haha.
@Julius: that's great news. ^-^
@CoolKid: LOL I spent 24 hours with no sleep.
Come the next night... *imitates sleeping*

I always enjoy myself here, Pheeb.

*wonders what Julius is talking about yet again in his confusing sharp mind*

lol

It ain't funny, Ma'am. 'E could cut wood with that sharp mind of his, he could! *uses western voice to dramatic the moment*

..............

Lol forget my dramatics, then? :P

......waaa??

Yep. Forget it. -.-

*Butts in on this interesting moment and smiles as the one tries to understand the other. Thinks at the same time to himself, Hmmm, so my mind is sharp....*

@Coolkid: it was a hypervole, duh! :P

*suddenly realised Julius is in the room and heard the whole conversation*


Errr..... I meant I get the impression that you ate a smart person and.... Ahh, sod it. -.-


Just don't get a big head.

-_-

TROLL-FACE.


Also..... Anyone read the Ryiria Revelations????