Mock Newbery 2026 discussion
Book of the Month 2013
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August Read- Summer of the Gypsy Moths
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I also didn't find any of the characters except Angel to be believable. George, especially - how can an adult be so naive? And I understand why Stella is such a neat freak (she needs order in her life), I was more worried that her cleanliness was bordering on obssessive compulsive rather than a quirk.
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The one part that I was grateful for was that Angel's aunt was real, and did come to take care of her. I worried through the whole book that Angel was delusional and no aunt really existed and she was going to end up back in foster care.


Overall, I couldn't put it down. I hope it will be in the running for a Newbery or at least an honor.



I enjoyed the book, but not sure if it is worthy of Newbery. It was quirky, original and I liked the dark humor. I think will appeal to kids even with a gruesome story line because most daydream about being on their own. I liked the details such as adding the Hints from Heloise although Stella is almost too good to be true.

Setting: I thought the setting was very well done. As a resident of Cape Cod myself, I recognized a lot of things, both physical (beaches, tiny little cottages, out-of-nowhere rain) and more intangible (tourists who are simultaneously kind and completely pre-occupied with their own vacation).
Style: I thought the writing style was solidly good. My mind was not blown by the line-by-line writing, but that takes a lot. I'd give it four out of five stars, better than average but not one where I'd have to stop and savor each line.
Characters: I thought the characters were very well done. Unlike Annette, I saw Stella's obsession with Heloise as a means of steadying herself, not an OCD problem. She wants things to be clean and orderly, but she doesn't NEED them to be, such as when she purposefully goes out into the water in the dark, or even just burying Louise. Angel was very well drawn. The small children they babysit acted just like small children, and so did their parents. I loved Katie's orange food and her mother's obvious exasperation, despite the fact that she had lovingly created it for her. George was in some ways a little too perfectly understanding of Stella. Unlike some other readers, I actually do believe that George could have been fooled by the girls, since he had no reason to think they were lying, plenty of evidence to think they weren't (the chili, Katie's comments, etc) and was not around very much. It's a tad hard to believe that he didn't push harder to visit when Louise was "sick", but he was always busy and just dropping by for a few hours to do the most necessary work. What I found harder to believe was the ending when SPOILER he gives up his life as a fisherman. Part of what made him not notice what the girls were up to was that he was so distracted by his own life, to suddenly give all that up is odd. END SPOILER. I loved Stella's characterization of her mother, and her own slow realization that her mother is never going to change.
Plot: Okay, there is a lot of suspension of disbelief in that the girls would really go through with this. But if you can accept the basic premise of the book, then the plot works. It seems strange that no one notices what the girls are up to, even Stella mentions that someone should have noticed, but it doesn't surprise me. All of the tourists are only there for a week or two, none of them appear to be repeat customers who might miss Louise, and they are intent on their own lives and vacations. As long as everything seems to be running smoothly there is no reason for them to demand to see Louise in person. With the exception of George, no other adults see the girls for more than a few minutes. Even the social worker can be excused for not noticing that the girls are thinner than they should be. These are girls living next to a thriving beach at an age when looking good is starting to become important. When the social worker shows up they have food in the house, so it's not terribly suspicious, and my social worker friends say that having people forget to meet them or show up late is more common than they'd like. I do think everything wraps up a little too neatly at the end (and totally saw who Stella would end up with from the very beginning), but it also doesn't end perfectly either, which is good.
Theme: I'm terrible at identifying themes. I guess this one is about connections and the ways in which we make our own connections with people in unexpected ways. If so, then the theme was well-developed.





My daughter and I really liked this one. True it isn't plausible, but so many wonderful books aren't. The part I felt was rather random was Stella tending Katie. I kept thinking that Katie's family would play a bigger role in the story but they were there and gone. In the end I just felt like this part of the story was filler-fluff.

Also, I felt like their very transitoriness added to the story, as if, had they been neighbors or otherwise permanent, then the family would have noticed something was wrong. Part of the reason the girls manage to pull off their ruse is that everyone around them that should/could have figured out that something was off was only around very briefly and entirely wrapped up in their own affairs. I think, sadly, that it is more realistic for the family to have enjoyed Stella's company and services without thinking to inquire further. When I see teens hanging out in the local park day after day, I assume that they're just bored and hanging around, not that they're runaways or have been locked out of the house for the day, or that their home situation is such that they're desperate to be outside and away. It's human nature.

Excellent arguments. Thank you both, for helping me to appreciate this part of the story more. I love to get another point of view and really enjoy all the wonderful discussions that we have been having about our monthly books.


I agree with others about the importance of Stella observing Katie's family - I think it was a definite step towards Stella realizing that her relationship with her mother wasn't normal.
Apart from that, I found the story lovely in an understated way and think it deserves a solid look by the Newbery committee.


The book is beautifully constructed, has unique characters, and an honest ending. I got the impression early on that George was fairly old and ready to retire, so his part in the ending made sense to me.
But I can understand how some people might not get into this book. However, I'm hoping the Newbery people will appreciate it and give it a chance.
Is it worthy of a Newbery?