A Place Called Dreams discussion

Ok, so my book is on this site called wattpad, it isn't complete yet but it hs 20 chapters so far and I'd love the feedback you can give!!
heres the link:
http://www.wattpad.com/story/1173115-...
Don't forget to create an account and comment, vote, etc. and you can give me an isight as to weather or not its good!! :)

Hmm...I'll check it out :)

Chloe wrote: "Hmm...I'll check it out :)"

ok thanks:)