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You want to be the best that you can be? Then be willing to accept constructive criticism! The Cthulhu Child: Revised edition (addition).
The book has received a number of positive reviews, both on Goodreads and Amazon. And, as writers, we all appreciate an expression of kind words for something we have spent long hours creating.
So, why then the update? Simple really. I have received a couple of reviews that, whilst generally positive, have nonetheless questioned the placement of two stories in the book. Jason Parent (What Hides Within), and Gregor Xane (Six Dead Spots), both commented on the placing back to back of stories which touched on similar themes.
It was a fair criticism.
Furthermore, these two authors have decent writing 'chops'. It made sense for me to take their comments on board.
Now I'll be honest here: When I first put the book together I considered the same 'placement issue'. And I thought that by going with the running order I had, I was being clever.
Obviously not!
I set out to go Double Bubble (as we'd say around my neck of the woods). This is to say, by placing these stories so close together, I thought I might prevent the reader from seeing the approaching 'punchline' in story two.
I got that wrong, aye?
So, generally positive reviews, although they come with a 'But'.
What then to do?
Now, let me be honest again, and tell you that I'm very much my own person. I can on occasion be quite opinionated (allegedly).
But I am also prepared to listen when given good advice.
Especially if it helps improve my writing technique.
I decided to re-open the file on The Cthulhu Child. Surgery was required.
At first I considered rearranging the layout, changing the running order of the stories. But in the end I opted to go even further. Two additional stories, and with added content at the end of the book.
'More Bang for your Buck', so to speak.
Now, I am nowhere near to being prolific. In fact I have the writing pace of a slug on Temazepam. But I have persevered, forcing myself to spend the last week putting together a couple of unsettling little additions to the horrors of The Cthulhu Child.
Of course my efforts could yet backfire. Up until now the book has received mainly positive feedback. Readers liked the stories.
I'll certainly be keeping my fingers crossed (and probably my toes too) that people continue to enjoy the updated edition.
Either way, I feel it was right to take on board the opinions offered. I strive to be the best I can be. And to do this I must respect the opinions of those who matter most, and this, of course, is the opinion of the readers.
Footnote: At the time of writing it is only the Kindle version that contains the updated content. Other formats: Kobo, Nook etc. will be updated over the next few weeks.
If you use one of these other formats please feel free to message me for further information as regards updating.
Peace.
Footnote: A paperback version of The Cthulhu Child is also now available from Amazon.
The Cthulhu Child
The Cthulhu Child: Goodreads giveaway!
The Goodreads giveaway will run up until September 09.
https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/2...
The ebook has proven to be very popular, so be sure to get your name in the hat for a chance to own this collection of unusual tales.
Ps: I currently have a glitch on my website, so I've been unable to post a direct link from there to the draw. So, please, if you know anyone who may be interested in entering this giveaway, then kindly do me a solid and spread the word!
Many thanks!
David

The Damnation Game: Now available in all formats!

My new novella, The Damnation Game, is now available for purchase across the universe. (Okay, that may have been a slight exaggeration. But you get my drift, right?)
Doubtless there is an army of Nook users (another exaggeration. I really gotta cut this shit out!) currently cheering very loudly and wondering what the hell is occurring.
Let me explain. A while back I took the decision to pull the majority of my titles from wider distribution, opting instead to tie myself into Amazon's KDP Select program.
Slim sales via those other channels meant that it made good business sense to utilize the perks available to authors loyal to Amazon.
It was the right decision at the time.
However, I am regularly being asked when more of my titles will be back in wider circulation, particularly Carmilla: The Wolves of Styria, and The Cthulhu Child.
I understand the frustration of those using Kobo, Nook, and other such devices, when a title they seek is being cloistered by Amazon.
Hence I have taken the decision to start 'leaking' my titles back into the wider market. Whether this will be the right decision (for my wallet) remains to be seen. Getting things right is still a fine balancing act.
I know I have a wider readership than in earlier times, but only time will tell if that translates across the board enough to cover a loss in Amazon borrows.
Still, we'll give it a go. Hopefully I can cover any losses, and it'll stop me further alienating users of 'other' e-Readers.
Here's to the future. So join me and take a walk into darkness!
The Damnation Game is available in paperback and also via:
Amazon Kindle
Barnes & Noble
Kobo
Oyster
Page Foundry
Scribd
Tolino