Zee David's Blog - Posts Tagged "wip-crime-mystery"

Rough draft : The Night She Died

Three days later



Ding, dong. The witch was dead. Melinda, She and her coffee speciale at 58 degrees could burn in hell—if there was any justice in the afterlife. Her eyes used to scour the room demanding and impatiently during morning hours while myself, her assistant, walked around with baggy eyes. Perhaps this was her happy ending, being freed from such tension and unpleasantness. Perhaps it was mine. I stood up from my chair as I lit a scented candle. That un bearing smell from the unloaded garbage bin behind my house was at it again

When I first heard the news yesterday, I struggled to suppress my laughter; cheeks flushed, faint grin and feigned worry. Thank goodness that call happened on the phone. I’d have given myself away.

She’s gone. Interesting.

I took a sip of my green tea and tossed my legs on the coffee table. One must not watch news like this in an uncomfortable position; one must watch the news relaxed.

And since Melinda was such a big deal, I got to watch the devastating announcement over and over this morning. Grabbing the remote, I pressed aggressively on the volume button so I could hear the news of her death crisp, loud, and clear. A small smile found its way to my face as I watched the newscaster announce her death. The smile got even wider when I saw her pale face plastered around the screen.
2 likes ·   •  0 comments  •  flag
Share on Twitter
Published on July 09, 2025 12:02 Tags: psycholgical-suspense, unreliable-narrator, upcoming-novella, wip-crime-mystery