Sooo since having the first version checked over and corrected i have decided to distinguish between the two by putting out a second edition.
the edition that has all the errors and such still present is soon to be removed from sales and the second edition will replace it after a few weeks.
in addition to that, there is a completely different three chapter start to give way to a follow on that my auntie wishes me to do

all in i made a boz-job by putting out the wrong file oopsy my bad.
its fixed =]

to see the front cover of the second edition on the facebook page
click here