To Comment or not to Comment

I imagine writers with huge sales don't read reviews, but I think most of the rest of us do. I have friends who've won national and international awards, but who can still pretty much quote, verbatim, from unpleasant reviews on Amazon. Personally, I use my first, and by some distance worst, newspaper review as a tool with creative writing classes.
Anyway, today I read a lovely review of my 2nd Seeker book, The Black Friar. It's the kind of review that makes you feel warm inside and think what a nice person the reviewer must be. The only thing was, the reviewer gently chastised me for resurrecting a real historical character - Isaac Dorislaus - 6 years after he'd died. The explanation is fairly straightforward - Isaac Dorislaus senior, the English Commonwealth's ambassador to the Netherlands was assassinated by Royalist exiles in 1649, but his son, also named Isaac, would become an integral part of the Protectorate's intelligence service in the 1650s. This is the kind of thing that it takes a great deal more ferreting about in a variety of specialist history books than I suspect most people have time for. Initially I put a comment with a correction on the post, but instantly deleted it for fear of appearing petty or stalkerish.

I can't guarantee that I don't take the occasional liberty - usually unintentional and I try not to take big ones. Only once did I knowingly take a big liberty - I invented a kind of crocus by which I had someone poisoned. Some of the species are poisonous, but unfortunately I couldn't find one that was in bloom at the time of year I needed it to be. The logical thing would have been to change the timing of the book - but I have only thought of that right now, 12 years too late! So, I invented a crocus that would be fatally poisonous, and would bloom when I needed it to. My subterfuge was only spotted when the Italian translator of the book - The Redemption of Alexander Seaton - sent me a despairing email: she had consulted every botanical encyclopaedia known to man or woman, and could find my colchicum mortis (the crocus of death) nowhere. Oh dear. Lesson learned.
The thing is though, once your book's out there, it's out there, and if you haven't made things clear enough to the reader, then it's too late.

The business of publishers sending out ARCs has shown me another side to this though. No spoilers, but the ending of the Bear Pit has something apparently unfeasible happen. In my original script, as submitted to my publisher, this was fully explained in the final few paragraphs. My editor felt the explanation unnecessary, and that the book was stronger without it. We debated back and forth but eventually, in a late night email after several very long and tiring days completely unrelated to my writing life, I said, 'Ok, you can cut it.'
There followed for me a few months of unease over it, another worried email or so, and then when the ARC reviews came in, some readers were incredulous, about the ending and didn't hold back on their incredulity. I'm very relieved that I do read reviews, and also that I didn't respond to these particular ones, but instead got in touch with my editor almost straight away - which was fortunate, as they were going to print the next day, and the book, as finally published, has my original ending.
The moral of the story? I'm not sure there is one. Reviewers must be free to say what they feel without having authors - friendly or otherwise - breathe down their necks. Authors can learn both from positive and negative reviews, and as time goes on you do develop a thicker skin for the very few that are downright unpleasant. I think.
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Published on January 20, 2020 03:29
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message 1: by Lindsey (new)

Lindsey I loved the first two Seeker books and hope to get to the third soon. Thank you for all the work you put in to the historical details, it makes for a fascinating and enlightening read. But just wanted to say I don't personally mind the occasional liberty (I probably wouldn't even notice). There is a reason the genre is called historical fiction, after all. :)

Looking forward to continuing to read the Seeker's adventures, and whatever you do next.


message 2: by S.G. (new)

S.G. MacLean Lindsey wrote: "I loved the first two Seeker books and hope to get to the third soon. Thank you for all the work you put in to the historical details, it makes for a fascinating and enlightening read. But just wan..."


Thank you so much (:


message 3: by MD (new)

MD I second Lindsey's comment. The books were fantastic and we, in this household of avid readers, are waiting for more. I am a historian, but I also have been a voracious reader from a very early age. When I read factual accounts, I expect facts and analysis. When I read historical fiction I expect a narrative anchored in fact, but taking the necessary licenses to draw me into the story. Your books accomplish this so beautifully!


message 4: by S.G. (new)

S.G. MacLean Lola wrote: "I second Lindsey's comment. The books were fantastic and we, in this household of avid readers, are waiting for more. I am a historian, but I also have been a voracious reader from a very early age..."
That's lovely to hear Lola. Thank you!


message 5: by Alan (new)

Alan I’m enjoying the books very much indeed. Just like the lady above I’m poised to start the third in the sequence.
Have to confess that I’m consuming them on Audible (not laziness just general reading bandwidth) but both the first two interpretations have been excellent.
Look forward to more in future and the non seeker book you trailed recently.


message 6: by S.G. (new)

S.G. MacLean Alan wrote: "I’m enjoying the books very much indeed. Just like the lady above I’m poised to start the third in the sequence.
Have to confess that I’m consuming them on Audible (not laziness just general readi..."


I love listening to audio books when I get the chance. Of the Seeker I've only listened to The Black Friar straight through on audio, but Jonathan Keeble sounds almost exactly as Seeker sounds in my head. Really glad you're enjoying them.


message 7: by Alan (new)

Alan Dear S.G.McClean,I have read your Seeker series and truly felt the aspirations, methods and fanaticism of a puritanical /military elite attempting to create a new "Jerusalem"on earth. If in the service of rendering this 17th Century event an historical liberty is taken so be it for it for your work purports to be historical fiction and the reader can always read a history of the period.I was saddened by the ending of The Bear Pit", but I am truly grateful for the Seeker series as well as "The Alexander Seaton " books.I am ever more aware that as an American that we are indeed Calvin's stepchildren.Great reading. Best Alan New Mexico USA


message 8: by S.G. (new)

S.G. MacLean Thank you very much, Alan. The patterns of history sometimes seem to repeat themselves without us even noticing. I'm so glad you've enjoyed the books. I'm working on the editorial notes for the 5th, and for now, last Seeker book at the moment. All best, Shona.


message 9: by Carolyn (new)

Carolyn I'm glad authors remember the good reviews as well as the unkind ones. I haven't read your Seeker series yet but loved The Bookseller of Inverness and hope you're writing a sequel to that.


message 10: by Daniel (new)

Daniel M. I was fortunate to have stumbled upon The Winter List by S.G. McClean. She writes beautifully. I love the time period and the characters. Her books are well written, interesting and informatiive.She brings an underlying element of suspense to her books. I recently finished The Bookseller of Inverness and I enjoyed it just as much. The Bookseller inspired me to read the Damian Seeker series, of which I have just started.

Bernard Cornwell is one of my favorite authors. I have read most all of his work. Now I have another favorite.


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