The Author as an Actor

Ang isang awtor para ding aktor na kailangan makapasok sa katawan ng kanyang mga tauhan at maramdaman ang kanilang dapat nararamdaman sa sitwasyon na sinulat para sa kanila.

An author is also like an actor who must get into the skin of his characters and feel what they need to feel in a situation written for them.

This is how I ended my review of the manuscript we were given to read in a recent seminar on editing in Filipino that I attended.

Not long afterwards, I had to go through my works in both Filipino and English for a project I’m working on (and also due to Google Drive’s warnings that I was close to exceeding my limit). I have more works in English and write with more elegance in the language for the simple reason that I have been exposed to a much, much larger body of literary works in it, being a bookworm child of two English teachers. But my Filipino works, all of which are for children, aren’t too bad (though bilingual and translated by myself, my book Hating Kapatid was written in Filipino as the idiom it centers on demanded). In either language, though, I don’t think the quality of my language is particularly impressive. Not if you are seeking richness of vocabulary and figures of speech. My style focuses on simple functionality, as I taught my students, drawing from the 5 C’s of Richard Lederer & Richard Dowis’s stylebook The Write Way: The S.P.E.L.L. Guide to Real-Life Writing that I adhere to which means being Clear, Correct, Concise, Coherent, and Considerate.

In fiction, my style varies depending on which character’s point of view I am taking. So perhaps I am more of a virtual actor than a verbal stylist. I struggle more with stringing words together when writing essays. When I write fiction, the characters take over. Even if I’m writing third person, I am so immersed in the experiences and feelings of my imaginary people once they come to life that I just get caught up in setting down everything without letting my perfectionist self-editing consciousness get in the way. More than that, entering so deeply in the story that it feels real to me allows me to draw my readers as deeply into it as well.

I suppose there are people who are able to write a story well while staying outside of it. But this is my way. I may not have breathtaking skill with words, but this is my gift. I am not going to call myself an empath lest I get compared to the awful sister in the most recent adaptation of Persuasion. Anyway, the words you use for things are less important than how you actually use the things, the technique in this case. And it works for me; in fact, it’s the only way I can really write.
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Published on October 24, 2023 00:10 Tags: writing-style
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