A Review That Humbled Me

I received a review of my novle, The Fox, that humbled me. I was at a loss for words after this review and on the next day an email that was just as incredible.

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Thursday, June 14, 2012
Arlene Radasky - The Fox

The Fox
By Arlene Radasky

Kindle Version Available 



Product Description
Dramatic in all the right ways, The Fox by new author Arlene Radasky does for bog bodies and Druids what no author in time has ever done; she celebrates ancient history, endless romance and undying love. Brilliant and utterly breathtaking, Radasky’s is a powerful new voice in romance, fantasy, and historical fiction. Bravo!

The Romans’ path of destruction jeopardizes a Caledonian clan unless they are able to strike a bargain with the Gods, which ultimately means a human sacrifice. Jahna is a member of this first century tribe. She has the power to merge minds, which she chooses to do with a twenty-first century woman, Aine MacRae and her contemporary, a young man Lovern, to whom she was hand-fasted in her time and of whom she shared a child, in order to save her people. In the name of the gods, Lovern was killed. Druids place his body in the sacred Black Lake, but through a visit from his ghost, Jahna sends their child away thus securing their bloodline. In the midst of madness, Jahna lives just long enough to reveal to Aine, her grief. Two thousand years later, in the year 2005, Aine is hoping to reestablish her career as an archaeologist and assists in the excavation in the Highlands of Scotland of a first century Caledonian chieftain’s tomb with fellow archaeologist, Marc Hunt. As the fates align, Jahna, guides Aine to one bronze bowl, then another, and when she is led by a ghost, Aine uncovers a two thousand year old man encased in a bog. As the circle goes unbroken, a heart’s chains are loosened and it is understood that Aine and Marc are able to rediscover their past love.

About the Author
A scholar of ancient history, Arlene Radasky is fortunate to have walked upon each of the seven continents on the earth. For the past two decades she has worked with a number of nonprofit organizations including the American Red Cross and Hospice of Santa Barbara. She currently lives in California and is a proud mother and grandmother. This is her first novel.


O.Scarlett! REVIEW by Rachel

I’m not actually sure what I was expecting when I picked up this book, a short fun children’s book, maybe?  Especially considering how cute the little fox is on the cover.  But fairly early in the book, you realize that the fox represents Lovern, and the border is the clan colors.

There are many areas of history that I find fascinating, and anything concerning the Roman Empire will usually catch my eye.  An added bonus was that this was also about Scotland and archeology.

The book is written in first person – usually from Jahna’s viewpoint, but quite at least a third of the book is written from Aine’s point of view, and a few places are from Lovern’s.  This may sound confusing, but the author was careful to label who was speaking first  person, and the date.  The book begins with Jahna in 72AD October.  She is serving her uncle in his home, not as a servant, but with her mother and because her uncle’s wife is dead.  She is 16, and despite trying to avoid her uncle’s glance – she is brought forward to be assigned a husband – one she has no love for the boy or his work.  She is devastated, but determines to be a good mate during the year of handfasting.  The boy is no more pleased than she, as his heart was set on another girl.  But such is the way of the clan.

Jahna is telling her life story – to Aine – through dreams that pass through time.  Aine lives in modern day London and is an archeologist.  She and Jahna have been dreaming together since their childhood.  Jahna also dreams of a boy, who takes a fox as his name sign.

While the book gets off to a slightly shaky start, as it was difficult for me to get a feel for what was going on right away, by the time I finished the first two chapters, I was completely intrigued – and I couldn’t wait for Aine to unearth the bog man ... which I expected to happen fairly early in the book.  Chapter after chapter sped by with discoveries of bones, bowls, ashes, homes, and so much more ... but no bog man.  I felt keen disappointed when he finally showed up in the story.  (This based on the product description from Amazon.)

Because of the first person nature of the book, I was really able to get to know the two main girl characters.  They are strong and determined, and I found myself hoping that their stories would have good endings.   Most of the important characters were well developed.  I’ve got a great imagination, and the pictures were so plainly painted with the authors descriptions, that you could almost smell the peat moss burning, and feel the cold of winter.  This was a story that drew me and kept me so involved with the life and love of the characters, that many times, I found hours had gone by without my noticing.

(The plot description here was extensive and contained spoilers. To read the full description go to website.)


The reader is taken on a heart wrenching epic tale.  Because the story is unfolding from the past and the present simultaneously, the reader has a unique insight into the archeological finds, gaining knowledge that the modern archeologists will not posses.   It is a story that allows the reader to connect the dots for themselves.  Just enough adventure to keep the reader involved, just enough romance to stir the heart, just enough danger to keep your palms sweaty, and just enough mystery to keep you guessing until the very end.  This was a lengthy read of well over 400 pages, but rarely did the story slow or lag to make me very aware of the length – and usually this was during Aine’s parts of the book.

I found it very difficult to pull myself back into the present once I reached the end of the book.  For days afterwards, I wanted to pick it up and read more, but the book had ended.   It wasn’t a rosy and happy book – but perhaps, it showed a good picture of what life was like for the people who were being conquered by the Roman Invasion.


Spiritual Content:
Jahna and Lovern are the spiritual leaders of their tribe.  There is a great deal of religious explanation, and ritual.  They talk directly to the gods in their dreams.  Jahna can see people on the other side of death, and helps the dying cross over.  Blood sacrifices are performed often.


Note:   Most of this book would be a fascinating conjecture of the life of the people living in Scotland around 80AD, even for readers as young as 12, but there are 4 areas where the book dips into the Mature reads – there are several love scenes between both couples, Aine and Marc, and Jahna and  Lovern.  In one full chapter, Jahna is captured, raped, and starved.  The rescue is quite bloody.  Lovern is sacrificed.  Parents should read this book before allowing a younger child to read it, to see if it is more than they want their child exposed to.

Genre/Theme:  Historical Fiction, Romance, First Century, Roman Invasion of Scotland, Archeology

Reading Level:  Mature TEEN - high school to college  - due to graphic nature of a capture and rape in one chapter, also blatant but short descriptions of sex between characters
Profanity: LOW - few mildly offensive words  -  there were a few words I found offensive, but others may not be offended by them.  Usually the offensive language was in the modern time.  Including using the name God.
Sexuality: OBVIOUS - blatant sexuality in text, but not explicit  - descriptions of body parts and reactions to them.  Most of the details are spared the reader.   ....  The sexuality during the rape chapter is far more blatant and offensive.
Other: human sacrifice, eating meat raw and bloody, rape, war and fighting, slavery, abusive marriage


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Labels: Age 16-20 H.S./College, Historical Fiction, Rachel's Reviews, Romance
2 comments:

Arlene RadaskyJune 16, 2012 11:48 AM
Rachel,
Thank you so much for the finely detailed and thoroughly enjoyable review of my book, The Fox.

I am humbled.

Arlene Radasky

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Mama EagleJune 16, 2012 1:32 PM
Thank you for allowing me the privilege of reading your book. And thank you for you nice comment.

I look forward to future books!

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