CRITICISM

This entry is in particular aimed at Jessica Fleming, who very kindly offered to help publicize my new book, The Lord of Opium. Thank you very much. I’m not sure anyone can do much after all the effort the publisher has put into advertising me. Few authors get as much support as I did.

I was amazed at some of the angry reviews I got, mostly on Goodreads. Where was this hostility coming from? I thought about it a lot and decided to address the situation here. I feel strongly about freedom of speech. People are entitled to their opinions and I don’t want to censor them. I do want to understand them.

Why were readers so upset? First of all, I think tastes have changed since I wrote The House of the Scorpion. Along with Twitter, Facebook and movies with nonstop action and special effects has come a desire for instant gratification. Plot and character are not as important. In fact, these slow the action down. My books develop slowly and don’t contain nonstop action. This is how I write and I am unable to change it.

Readers become fond of a novel and want the same experience repeated in a sequel. I felt quite sorry for J. K. Rowling stuck with producing EIGHT Harry Potter books. I admire Rowling and thank her for making the publishing world safe for long children’s books. But EIGHT books on the same topic? It would have killed me. And readers were horrible to her when she dared to write for adults. The same problem befell Jean Auel. She had six novels to slog through and was clearly fed up half way through. I think readers wanted a clone of The House of the Scorpion and got something else. It had to be. Matt was a helpless pawn in the first book and master of his own fate in the second. Of course it couldn’t be a rerun. One reader was outraged because I wrote a sequel at all. She said I had been seduced into doing a trilogy for money and that it would all turn out badly. Gentle reader, there will be no trilogy. There is no law that says books have to come in threes.

One of the most astonishing criticisms was about Matt kissing Mirasol when she was asleep. This was deemed sexual harassment of the worst sort. If you examine the book you will see that I was using the symbol of Sleeping Beauty. Mirasol is compared to a statue at the bottom of a lake that becomes visible for only a few short minutes. It has nothing to do with sex. In the first book Matt talks to Rosa, his sadistic caretaker, after she has been turned into an eejit. He is trying to wake her up. Mr. Ortega tries to wake up Eusebio with music and gives this idea to Matt. The relationship between Matt and Mirasol is one of pity mixed with love. And love is not the same as sex.

I write books for people to enjoy and think about. If you don’t like my books don’t read them. Problem solved. For the rest of you (and thanks again to Jessica Fleming) let’s all hope for a movie of The House of the Scorpion to pep things up.
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Published on October 19, 2013 10:19 Tags: the-lord-of-opium
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message 1: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie I loved The Lord of Opium. It was worth the wait. Character development is one of the things I appreciate most about your writing. I enjoyed being in Matt's head as he worked through problems and struggled to figure out his world.


message 2: by Maddie (new)

Maddie I can't wait to read it. I probably won't be giving it a bad review, I like it when characters change in radical ways.


message 3: by Claire (new)

Claire I haven't read Lord of Opium yet (so no spoilers please!) but I'm very excited for it, and you shouldn't let a few harsh critiques get in the way of your work. Personally, I find your writing style wonderful, though I can see how it wouldn't be for everyone. You have a unique storytelling voice that I find exciting as well as inspiring (no joke; when I was thirteen and finished The Sea of Trolls for the first time, I looked at that book and thought to myself "I want to make something like THAT.") Anyway, I won't bore you with anymore fangirling. Just so you know, you have lots of supporters to balance out those who don't get your work. Too bad for them; everyone has their thing I guess. :)


message 4: by Linda (new)

Linda I really enjoyed LORD OF OPIUM and was intrigued with the character development and how Matt handled the power he inherited. I admired his goal to improve a flawed system, and also your view of how even those striving to solve corruption have to make hard choices which show their own flaws. I also loved how at the core of this story (much like JK Rowling's books which I admire) is the strength of friendship. Matt's friendships were made of heart and loyalty.

Excellent story! I was turning the pages, totally hooked. Brilliant writing!!!

And I'm hoping for a movie, too.


message 5: by Kari (new)

Kari Thank you for your amazing books! My middle school students are OBSESSED with House of the Scorpion this year.. one student read it, did a brief book commercial for it in my class, and it has taken off! I cannot keep enough copies in my classroom to satisfy the demand. Now I am reading the sequel along with a student, and we are excited every day to talk about what we have read. I am loading the room up with more of your books, and I am so thankful to any author that can bring about this kind of excitement about reading in an 8th grade special education classroom.


message 6: by Squeaky (new)

Squeaky I was very happy to see The Lord Of Opium show up in our bookfair. It was the first book I grabbed for our library. I enjoyed reading it (just finished this Sunday morning at 9:25 AM), but I am glad there won't be a third book. Sometimes authors (or maybe publishers) don't know to quit when everything has been said! I have been talking up The House Of The Scorpion for years, but, after an initial interest when it was new, our middle-school students don't seem to be interested in it. I don't get it, it's got EVERYTHING!


message 7: by Jan (last edited Nov 24, 2013 08:02AM) (new)

Jan I loved the House of the Scorpion, but enjoyed The Lord of Opium even more. I couldn't put it down. I don't need non stop action for a story to be interesting. I loved the character development in this book, seeing how Matt matured and dealt with suddenly having so much wealth and power, and how his relationships with those he loved changed and grew.


message 8: by Sandra (new)

Sandra Unfortunately, I was surprised but not shocked to hear that some people said unkind things about The Lord of Opium. Ahh, the Age of the Internet, when people can be jerks with impunity.

I do understand that it might not appeal to the same tastes of those who liked The House of the Scorpion, but I was immediately taken by the very different premise of the second book: as the author says, Matt becomes "master of his own fate," and I was fascinated by the process, and very curious to see how he would deal with power and his own genetic makeup.

I was equally fascinated by all the interesting facets of the plot that are covered in the appendix, everything from the Saint of Drug Dealers to the Biosphere and mushroom growing. I was constantly impressed with the plot machinations -- the idea that El Patron's outrageous greed and distaste for progress resulted in the unintended consequence of a clean environment when everywhere else in the world was all fouled up.

I thought for awhile that this was part of a trilogy, but I, for one, was relieved that it was a sequel. I thought the same thing the author said above: "Who says everything has to come in trilogies??"

I will, however, be looking for more by Nancy Farmer! Thank you, Ms. Farmer, for the alchemical magic of your hard work and creativity to create one of the most sophisticated and multi-dimensional dystopian novels for young adults that I have read.


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