Another gorgeous cover sketch

Guys! Help me out! I need to decide which pair of sketches will become the cover and bonus illustration for the Zenobia novel, which should be out around mid-September. They're both so nice I can't decide!



This is A/B

And this is C/D:

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Published on June 18, 2014 07:52
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message 1: by Iset (new)

Iset I vote A and B. I just really like the vista over the city in A, and the feel of the triumph and the confetti going by in B.


message 2: by Libbie Hawker (new)

Libbie Hawker (L.M. Ironside) I love the feel of the triumph, too.

It's always so hard to choose whenever Lane gives me options. Arrgh!!

If I do go with A/B, I think I'll ask him to have her holding the hilt of her sword in that one. Make her look a little more "active" as she looks out over Palmyra.


message 3: by Iset (last edited Jun 18, 2014 09:31AM) (new)

Iset Yes! Have her with her hand on the pommel. Her arm roughly where it is but move the sword back and the hand on the pommel. I like that.

In favour of the other one, I do like the boldness of the face on cover - it's rarely done these days and I like it for that reason (tired of headless women covers). But the side pictures offer these glimpses of the surroundings that are just so pretty.


message 4: by Jackie (last edited Jun 18, 2014 11:09AM) (new)

Jackie My vote is for C/D. She looks fierce, yet beautiful. I also like the background and the colors go really well together.


message 5: by Libbie Hawker (new)

Libbie Hawker (L.M. Ironside) Yeah, the colors really have me in C/D, too. And I agree that a full face shot is such a rarity in HF these days! But maybe I don't want to go too far "off trend" in that way.

Arrgh!! Such a tough choice!


message 6: by Jackie (new)

Jackie What's wrong with going "off trend"?


message 7: by Libbie Hawker (new)

Libbie Hawker (L.M. Ironside) It usually leads to fewer book sales. If I weren't doing this full-time now and relying on it to pay my bills, I wouldn't be as concerned about that! :)

BUT, I don't think it's super-far off trend (the C/D one, that is) so it could still sell the book effectively. I do really, REALLY love the colors in that one, and she looks very strong and confident, which I love.


message 8: by Lisa (new)

Lisa My preference is for A/B - it's very atmospheric, plus I love the blue sky in A and just adore B. That said, I do really like C as well, but I feel there's something awkward about the way the arms are held in D.


message 9: by Nikki (last edited Jun 18, 2014 10:02PM) (new)

Nikki I prefer A/B, they appear more like slightly blurry photos and the woman looks fierce, whereas C/D is too obvious a drawing for my taste, especially D looks like it is from a comic book.

BTW, when do you think the book will be on GR?


message 10: by Libbie Hawker (new)

Libbie Hawker (L.M. Ironside) Well, keep in mind these are just preliminary sketches. The final versions will have Lane's typical more-realistic feel to them. :)

I hope it'll be on GR soon! Can indie authors add upcoming releases to GR? I thought they could only be added if they're available for pre-order (which indie titles never are unless the author is a mega-seller and Amazon offers it.) But maybe I'm wrong. Anybody know for sure? I'd love to start getting this one and Tidewater on people's TBR lists!!


message 11: by Jackie (new)

Jackie L.M. wrote: "It usually leads to fewer book sales. If I weren't doing this full-time now and relying on it to pay my bills, I wouldn't be as concerned about that! :)"

Yeah, I don't blame you! It's interesting though because as a shopper my eye tends to be drawn to 'off trend' books, which is why I asked. Also, I tend to associate all books that look the same, which can be good or bad. Books that blend in only get my attention if it's by a particular author I've enjoyed in the past or an eye-catching title.

Best of luck choosing! I can't wait to see how it comes together.


message 12: by C.P. (new)

C.P. Lesley Yes, I agree. A/B. More active, more engaging, less defeated (we don't want to read about a defeated heroine).

Love the art. Your cover artist is really talented. I also love the subtle echoing of the Tidewater cover applied to a completely different subject.


message 13: by Nikki (new)

Nikki I think you can add the books to GR LM, I see books so often added that are not at all available for pre-order or even have a title etc etc. An author could simply have mentioned a new book and they frequently get added. I see no reason an author couldn't add a book themselves using this form. People do it all the time to add books not already on the site, the only question would be the author aspect I suppose but I don't see it being an issue (and I have seen other indie authors do it...no one has come for them yet haha).

BTW I think even if the art were completed I would still be more drawn to A/B. I agree with CP in that C/D looks too defeated. Definite talent either way though.


message 14: by Libbie Hawker (new)

Libbie Hawker (L.M. Ironside) Jackie -- I hear that! I'm trying to find just the right line between blending in and standing out too much. It's a very narrow balance beam!

CP -- Most people are leaning toward A/B, so that's what I am going with. And yes, Lane is AMAZING!

Nikki -- thank you! I'll check that out tomorrow. I almost have the cover for Tidewater finalized, so I can add that soon.


message 15: by Laura (new)

Laura Gill Ah, too late, then. I like C and B.


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