"He wondered briefly how her voice would sound if she were able to speak." That looks like Chekhov's gun. I expected it to fire in the end. Ka-poel would still remain mysterious for us and don't Ka-poel and Taniel deserve some kind of reward? They could have disappeared on their own. People do not need divine help for that. Can't wait your new book, thank you. I apoligize for any mistake, English is not my naitive.
she were able to speak." That looks like Chekhov's gun. I expected it to fire in the end. Ka-poel would still remain mysterious for us and don't Ka-poel and Taniel deserve some kind of reward? They could have disappeared on their own. People do not need divine help for that.
Can't wait your new book, thank you.
I apoligize for any mistake, English is not my naitive.