Jennifer I would like to paste a part of a story that I am hoping that I can turn into a book and eventually a series. This is only a part of the book. I need to get a new laptop and have the person at the computer store to move the information from my old laptop to the new laptop. I hope that you do not mind this paste. I to be able to view your response to this "favor" and your ideas on this "blurb".
I do understand that you may not be able to respond right away but I am beginning to develop patience due to the fact I need to get the funds for the laptop. I come to my local library to do my correspondences so I have a limited time and access to the internet.
So here is the first part of my story, now mind you I have almost 3 chapters written and will continue with it when I can.The private home and den of Bill and Janice Rayfale.
"NOOO!" The cry coul be heard for blocks! The question was "Why was Bill run off the interstate, then shot?" 'Tmbly' also known by the name of "Clair Rayfale" knew that she would not ever be able to say "I am sorry Dad!"
PRESENT DAY!!
Clair was trying her very best to convince mom 'Janice' to allow her to repair her adopted father's car that had been returned to the family. Janice asked Clair "Why would you want something that your father died in?" "Dad died because of the secret that surrounds me and my adoption." Color drained from Janice's face. "How did you find out about the adoption?" "That was what the fight was about before dad went on his business trip!" "Who told you that you were adopted?" "Nora and Noah!" ***So, hiccup.*** "I suppose that you fought with them?" "Yup!" "Why?" "Everything that I have worked for for so long and so hard! I guess they are jealous of all the education I have gotten!" "Two or three different agencies paid for it!" "Nora thinks that I wanted to be born into a society that thought that mixed twins (a boy and a girl) indicates evil!" "You do realize that is why your father died!" "I am aware of that and I understand that I could die just like dad did!"
PAST HISTORY
In a very superstitious village the wife and mother of 3 was about to give birth to her 4th child. The midwife was required by the laws of the elders of any "mixed twins". This auspicious day of a "mixed birth"! Tmbly's "Clair Rayfale" was put up for adoption or sacrifice! Bill and Janice Rayfale had a second chance to raise a "smart" child!
I hope you like it. I do have this very same writing in my personal writing on my profile. Hope to talk with you soon. Doris
This is only a part of the book. I need to get a new laptop and have the person at the computer store to move the information from my old laptop to the new laptop.
I hope that you do not mind this paste.
I to be able to view your response to this "favor" and your ideas on this "blurb".
I do understand that you may not be able to respond right away but I am beginning to develop patience due to the fact I need to get the funds for the laptop.
I come to my local library to do my correspondences so I have a limited time and access to the internet.
So here is the first part of my story, now mind you I have almost 3 chapters written and will continue with it when I can.The private home and den of Bill and Janice Rayfale.
"NOOO!"
The cry coul be heard for blocks!
The question was "Why was Bill run off the interstate, then shot?"
'Tmbly' also known by the name of "Clair Rayfale" knew that she would not ever be able to say "I am sorry Dad!"
PRESENT DAY!!
Clair was trying her very best to convince mom 'Janice' to allow her to repair her adopted father's car that had been returned to the family.
Janice asked Clair "Why would you want something that
your father died in?"
"Dad died because of the secret that surrounds me and my adoption."
Color drained from Janice's face.
"How did you find out about the adoption?"
"That was what the fight was about before dad went on his business trip!"
"Who told you that you were adopted?"
"Nora and Noah!" ***So, hiccup.***
"I suppose that you fought with them?"
"Yup!"
"Why?"
"Everything that I have worked for for so long and so hard!
I guess they are jealous of all the education I have gotten!"
"Two or three different agencies paid for it!"
"Nora thinks that I wanted to be born into a society that thought that mixed twins (a boy and a girl) indicates evil!"
"You do realize that is why your father died!"
"I am aware of that and I understand that I could die just like dad did!"
PAST HISTORY
In a very superstitious village the wife and mother of 3 was about to give birth to her 4th child.
The midwife was required by the laws of the elders of any "mixed twins".
This auspicious day of a "mixed birth"!
Tmbly's "Clair Rayfale" was put up for adoption or sacrifice!
Bill and Janice Rayfale had a second chance to raise a "smart" child!
I hope you like it.
I do have this very same writing in my personal writing on my profile.
Hope to talk with you soon.
Doris