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- Perhaps include why she doesn't talk to many people or is very shy in her Personality
- "...of Rapunzel Corona..." Is 'Corona' her last name? If so, why is Shadow's last name 'White'?
- "... daughter or Taylor Swift. ..." I don't quite understand this bit of the sentence..
- Add at least 2 more lines to History
- Weaknesses, "her family and"..."villains"? Please elaborate on how her weakness is 'villains'
@Maya: APPROVED and Cabin Rose

"Wooooooooow, thanks, Jack!" Harper said, grinning at her reflection, then went back up to her bunk before remembering Jack had asked a question. "Oh! Um, well, I dunno, my mom just sort of thought if I came here my magic would finally show...she's a witch, you know...don't know if I've said that already, but yeah...what about you, Jack?" Harper started fingering her new complicated braid absentmindedly. While she thought about her mother, her hair went to a deep, dark blue, the color of a warm summer's night.


((Sry I didn't know what else to put))

Boeralis was going to go retrieve the ball, but then it began rolling away, farther and farther, until it disappeared. Borealis was going to ask Darley where it went, then thought maybe it was supposed to do that, so he casually went and got another ball. This time he was able to knock down two of the pin things, but before he was able to get another ball, the metal contraption came again and took all his pins. "Where'd they go?" Borealis said, outraged. He'd finally done something right and the bowling alley had to go and glitch and take the pins from him. It wasn't fair. "Darley, where'd they go?" he asked, turning to her.

"Sure!" Harper said, standing to take Daeva's spot on the bed.

Harper snapped out of her...I suppose you could call it a 'trance' at Dae's words, and after they took their time registering in her brain, she nodded and put the necklace on. For a few moments, all she could feel was the blissful tingly sensation, but all too soon it subsided and left Harper feeling slightly dizzy and a tad sick. "Wow, this is...some necklace, Dae..." Harper said.

((I'm completely blanking, what are the gutter things on the sides of the lanes?? And did I describe the outfit correctly? I looked up a pic of Jasmine's outfit and I think I did a decent job))