King Macachor asked Robert G. Williscroft:

Your review of Whispers of the Raging Waters was not helpful to the book. You sound judgmental. Take it down for it is not good to your image. Am I right?

Robert G. Williscroft Mr. Macachor--I gave your book 4 stars and an excellent, almost glowing review. As a reviewer, I see my task as informing a potential reader about a book, its positive and not so positive elements--NOT to help the book. I am a 78-year-old successful author with 18 published books (and more on the way). I have something to offer a writer such as you, and I would encourage you to accept my two slightly critical comments with grace. You are a fine writer with an elegant turn of phrase. But you really do need an English-language editor, and you really do need to learn how to format a flowing ebook. If you were to have "Whispers of the Raging Waters" edited by an English-language editor, and if you were to reformat the ebook to industry standards, I would be happy to look at the book a second time. Just notify me here when you have done this.

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