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In Jackie MacMullan and Shaquille O' Neal's nonfiction book, "Shaq Uncut: My Story," it is about Shaquille's life growing up to be what he is today as a basketball star. Shaquille grew up in a very dangerous neighborhood in Newark, New Jersey. There were shooting and many bad things going on there. Growing up was always tough for Shaquille. First because of his size and second because of the violence. Shaquille was so big and fat that he was always teased and that's why Shaquille always tried to be cool by doing tons of violence. It bought him nowhere, but trouble. Still through the violence, he loved his size for one reason. He was overall good on basketball. He learned tons of people supported him and made him better as a player. That all lead him to be drafted and the NBA stuff began for him. All of the events were told in the book by Shaquille. It was written by him which makes it a biography. Depending on nonfiction books, there are many types and there are also many kinds of how the text is formatted. This nonfiction book is a biography and it is formatted in chapters. The chapters are separated by a part of Shaquille's life. For example, one chapter would be about Shaquille's life when he was a little boy and the next one would be on his life in high school. The whole story of Shaquille's life is told in a timeline starting from his birth. That is why the authors used chapters. The book wouldn't be using subtitles for example because the sections aren't separated by the type of facts about him. At the end of the book, there are a few pictures in like a timeline from when he was a kid to as of now present. That is put for a certain reason and that reason is because the readers need to understand more about Shaquille's life growing up. The pictures gave tons more details and information about his life. If I just read the book with no pictures, I would know about Shaquille's life, but have no clue who he is. The pictures in the back also had captions which gave each more information by telling what each picture is about. I think this nonfiction book was written to inform you about Shaquille O' Neal's life.


My book is strurctured into chapters because evey chapter tells us about a small opsicle the crew had to over come in order to survive the harsh and terrible condition in which they where headed right into. In addition they have chapters in my book that that people can learn about different aspects of what was going on throught the book.










I like the text structure like this because its easier and more comprehendible.
1.) How is your text structured? Chapters? Diary entries? By specific subject/topic? Why did the author choose this structure?
2.) Choose a text feature in your text. Why was it included?
For a “4”: Did I….
• Write a topic sentence that provided the title, author, and genre of my text?
• Provide context of what is happening in the text, so my reader understands what I’m talking about?
• Thoroughly explain the significance of my quote/how it proves my idea?
• Check for correct punctuation and spelling?