Beta Reader Group discussion
Available (and very eager) beta reader here!
date
newest »


I have an 8 minute trailer here(http://youtu.be/YNSoWkN_Ovo). And Episode 1 of the novella is linked below.
I call it literary fiction, a landscape story…takes place primarily in the Empty Quarter, 2009-2010.
Tell me if the trailer interests you…tell me if it is attractive and promising. If so, check Episode 1 which sets up as a background landscape, set in the Bernese Alps, from which the main character leaves for his adventure in the Empty Quarter.
Level of harshness…just be frank. Does it hang together for you? Does it have pace?
Please let me know if you get into it. eflaherty at mac dot com
Thanks,
Edward Flaherty


Hi, August! Sending you my book now.
Thanks!
Vicki
Send me an email giving me some idea of the type of critique you want/preferred level of harshness/anything you want me to focus on. It would also be helpful if you sent along a brief synopsis with the novel.
Email is augustfalcon (at) gmail (dot) com, or you can message me on here.