Writing Passionates discussion

I think it's a neat idea, SBG. The idea of people randomly "disappearing" when they're supposed to die is cool. That could be a way to tie it to reality, by saying something about how "when missing person reports turn up dry the people are sometimes in the otherworld."

Just start writing it and let your pen/pencil (keys--if you work on a computer) show you where to go. Perhaps you'll come up with a "full-plot" idea then. Write what you have. You can always edit if things don't fit. :)

Hmm sounds kewl ... reminds me of this weird manga book i read once ... only your idea sounds way better! lol

kewl i like all those names ... hmmm i like Braeden. very unusual. i likey unusual names :)

I like Braedan, too. That and Killian.

yeah, both cool and weird ... weird in a cool way! :D

yeah it's a boy's name ... according to behindthename.com :)

i know what u mean ... that happens to me too ... ><
hmm yeah ongoing conflict like a war or something usually helps

yeah maybe some of the realm-ppl don't like the humans .... that could cause conflict.

so you're saying, some of them capture the humans and then push them back thru the portal - therefore back into danger, so they die? seems a little complicated ... couldn't they just kill the humans or something? idk ...

OOH IDEA!!!
okay, how about if you're Rescued, it's just a POSSIBILITY that you'll die. so, you can stay in the realms place forever and can never go back to your old life OR you're allowed to go back, and possibly live, but you also might die
... which is why ppl would be conflicted about going back through the portal.
does that make sense??

That would be cool. Like they'll live for sure if they stay in the new realm, but if they REALLY wanted to go back to the old one they could. The catch is they might die if they go back.

exactly!! i mean, that wouldn't be the whole conflict, but it would be a good twist ;)

It would.

I like the idea of the other realm people getting mad at the people the Rescuers save and deciding the engage in war with them. That would be a neat conflict. :)

Would they take their anger out on only the rescued people, or would they travel through the portals and attack the people? Can they go through the realm not being Rescuers? Can anyone go through the portal, or just people who are being saved from death?

Or you could have the new area have no government at all. They could have rank societies, where different jobs give you different levels of law in the realm.

Alright, just brainstorming. :)

Any other aspect of the story you wanted help with?

If I were in your position I'd just start writing and let your story guide you. I wouldn't worry about getting it all planned out before you start.

How about a name like Demetre for the guy? Pronounced, "De-mee-tree."

Veim
Impir
Deme
Tre
Metre
Imp
Emet

idk

I sorta like Metre.

I really like the name Chloe for your M.C.

yeah that's a pretty name

no, i think it's great! it sounds like a "shy" and cute kind of name ^_^

ooh yeah that sounds awesome!

kewl

awesome!

cool! :D

Have it be in both. Like have some of the relm people get into the world and wreak chaos and bad stuff. Then there could be war and battles that can be going on in both places.
Just an idea but having the setting be two places gives you more flexability.

Actually, I think that it would be cool if it were mostly in the realm.

And your idea actually gave me a different idea. Basically, what happened to those boys? What happened to the girl's family. Hmmm.

sounds good. I can't wait to read what you come up with.

Maybe he was an awkward child. And when he finally got to be at a less awkward age (maybe almost adult) he had issues with drinking, which he had developed because nobody had ever liked him.

wars are always good for a plotline.
There could be like a string of relm people killings and he could be the suspect. Just a thought.

yeah you do. well it sucks that it didn't work out though.

Yeah I know, But you can still use all that stuff you came up with for other stories right?

Yeah that sucks. I'm working on 2 stories and I'm at a dead end. I can't stand it.

like the name jareth demetrius black but you should cut the black lest you want yo bite offof Twilight

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hey i like the character and all, i think that you should deff continue with him. i have so many ideas for him like.....he should have a stereotype and no one likes him because of a war that masssacared the elves between the vampyr guys...and idk ummm yea you should hve him be ambushed which would show off his powers and stuff idk just message me back...i got lots of ideas

cool id like to see it when you hve the outline finished!
im also working on a story thats smilar,,,, but my protag. is a wizard who finds out hes a quarter hellspawn aka demon so yea!