SHERlocked discussion

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Ugh can't season three come out already!

Read this if your bored and comment what u think. Btw I'm kind of lazy sometimes so plz don't correct the u=you.

Sherlock woke up to the sound of a sweet voice, a female voice. He smiled, knowing that he was safe. The room he was in was pale blue in colour and had big white windows, which led out onto the balcony. It had been his room when he was a child; various items of his childhood memory were on the shelves of his bookcase; such as science and biology textbooks. He glanced to his right, frowning a little in confusion. Someone was sitting next to him, stroking over his curls. Sherlock flicked his eyes to look at the window, taking in the beautiful view of the garden; before they rested on the person in the chair. “Mummy?” he muttered. His voice was much quieter than it usually would be.

Sherlock froze up. Flashbacks played in his mind. His mom teaching him how to read. Lying in the grass looking up at the sky and telling her what types of clouds were passing. Although she was gone for 15 years! Was this really her?

He blinked hard. It had to be a dream, right? Sherlock swallowed hard, slowly flicking his eyes around the room. A small, but weak smile twitched on his lips. His room had been left in the same way, all this time.

It was an illusion. He was dead right! He had missed the laundry truck when mariarty had died. He was caught up in the look of sorrow on johns face. It couldn't be real! He was stuck, for once in his life!

Sherlock rubbed at his eyes and blinked. The room was gone. This wasn't real. He slowly propped himself up on his elbows, his bottom lip trembling. "Molly?" he called softly. Hoping that he had been hallucinating, and that he was in fact in the morge.

"Oh thank god you're alive!" Molly said with tears in her eyes. "I mean I thought I lost u!" Sherlock looked up at Molly as if it were regular for him to jump off buildings, and got out of the hospital cot, he realized Molly was staring at him and for him to know this he had to be staring back.

He blinked hard, his throat going dry. Sherlock nodded, he was lost for words for a moment. He slowly sat himself up, and cleared his throat. "I w-was...hallucinating. That's an effect of the drug, isn't it?" he asked, raising a dark eyebrow.

"What are you going to do sherlock? I mean Everyone thinks you're dead. And they now all think you're a fake!" She looked down at him. Sherlock always had a plan though, he smiled and said, " I'll take some coffee now. Black two sugars... Oh u know the routine!" Sherlock grabs his scarf and runs upstairs
Molly was there waiting for him.
"May I use your phone?" Sherlock asked Molly.
"Yes." She said handing her phone to sherlock. "What for?"
"I'm calling John."
"But you can't remember if he knows-"
"Molly,I know what I'm doing!" Sherlock rolls his eyes and dials the number.

Feel free to continue! And don't be afraid to criticize it!

((i like his thing. i'll do this tomorrow! great idea! right now i gotta get some sleep))

Sherlock rolls his eyes and dials the number. The phone rings and sherlock impatiently taps the table. Finally Sherlock hears johns voice!
"Hello."
"221 B, 5 minutes!" Then sherlock hangs up, molly hands sherlock his coffee, and sherlock runs outside and grabs a taxi.


"Here's your miracle John!" Sherlock says as John gets out of the cab.

"B-b-but I saw you jump... Wait.... I checked your pulse. You were dead! We buried you! How?" John asks, "I thought--"

"Oh it was simple! That body wasn't me! Molly and I made it look like me. When I jumped off the building I fell on to a mattress. Then I placed the body where I would have fallen and I went in a truck!" Sherlock laughed, "You should have seen your face!" John gave sherlock an angry look, but inside he couldn't be happier to see sherlock!

"Come inside John!" Sherlock and John walked inside. Mrs. Hudson took one look at sherlock and fainted. "John, Moriarty isn't dead!"

"How do you kn--" John caught himself doubting sherlock and laughed. " so what are we going to do?"

I wrote a little more.

that's nice too, but my ugh sense s tingling.
Sherlock can't reveal himself just after the fall. what about the graveyard scene?
OK, that's not that important. but he can't just go out of the hospital like that! i mean a man just jumped off a building with another dead one on the roof. people can't see him just walking away like that! and specially the snipers. he needs some disguise.
don't you think?

Yeah. I guess I'll scraggly the part about him meeting John. Do you want to write a part about him disguising himself. Or sherlock thinking of a plan?

We can put that part in later I guess or maybe just get rid of it altogether. What do you think?

This is a great idea, great fanfic.

I think you should keep some of it, but maybe leave it a little bit longer until he reveals himself.