Just the Way YOU are! discussion

Here you can post your writing. You can post it as a comment or a link. We would love to read it!

A story, possibly book, that I'm working on right now (:



I'd appreciate it if you read it and comment what you think! I wouldn't mind reading your stories as well (:

I love writing, but i dont have anything completed yet...

@CS and Camille, sweet! I'll read them when I get a chance, I'm about to get off right now.

@Mercy Emma, I'll look forward to reading something of yours when you finish it :)

I mostly write poems. Here they are: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

I'm working on a novel on Wattpad if any of you want to check it out. Please give feedback if you do; thanks.

http://wattpad.com/_Pulchritudinous_

I have one writing up and I just put a poem up. It would mean the world to me if you could read them! They aren't too long. :) thank you SOOO much!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/1...

I will have more poems up later, if you're interested. :)

I love writing I wrote thirty thousand words of a book I was working on and lost it.

Oh no! That's terrible :( There's absolutely no way you can get it back?

Oh my gooodness..... Max! That's terrible! I'm so sorry. :(

My dad. He is a computer guy. Spent days trying to retrieve the lost files and they were all corrupted.

Aww, I'm sorry :(

I will rewrite it better. When I get back in the mood to write.

I would love to read it if you decide to post it Lia :)

Me too!

Lia wrote: "I write, but I just don't like putting it up online, I'm too shy!"

Don't be shy! I would love to read your stories as well (:

What is Kendo?

Okay so that is what every seems to be doing. Thanks.

people in other groups talk about it as well.

How?

none that I can afford.

yeah I don't have any money so, yeah.

Read my writings here.

I've got a buttload of poems. Here's one:



If you love something
You set it free
You let it go
You let it be
If it comes back
It was yours from the start
You can be happy
It stays in your heart
If it takes the freedom
Stays away
Just know that
You loved it anyway

Nice!

I'm writing a book (it's not on Goodreads yet) but I made a few covers (minus my name for safety purposes) and I was wondering what you guys think.

It's about a girl named Cleo who lost her twin sister, Clara to cancer. She's devastated, but tries to hide it from everybody she loves and she does some pretty stupid things in the process. It's told from Cleo's POV.







I already have an idea of which one I'm going to use, but I thought I would get some other opinions on it just in case ;) So which one do you like the best?? Which one would you be most likely to pick up?? :D

I cant see them?

They aren't showing up for me either

Nooooooooooo!!! D: Okay, one sec.

How about now?

I think it's because I'm using the app, I'll go to the website and look at them

I like the second one.

Okay, that's the one I'm leaning towards :D

Nice:)

I like the second one best:)

Alright, the second one it is :D

YAY!!

Cool:)

So, hows it goin?

Thanks guys! :D

I'm good, Racheal :) How about you?

Working on some new story right now, but I'll give you the link when it is finished.

Jason

I wake up and gets dressed then grab my jacket and runs to school and a truck comes at me . i ran and everything was a blur and seconds later i was in my class everyone looking at me like what the. look in the window and my hair was blown back and i walk to my desk and grab my bag that i left yesterday and dig through and grab my comb and comb it up to make it spiky.my friend lizzy looks at me and says" what was with your hair" yeah what was with my hair" i i i don't know liz i was about to be hit by a truck and i ran and i saw the way to school in a matter of seconds "i whisper .she looks at me then laughs so hard that she falls back in her chair."Elizabeth!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" the teacher yells . oh ms crab apple ." yes ms Bernstein." ms barnstain scowls"its Ms barnstain!!!!!!!!!!!!!!."potato patoto"lizzy says smugly and crabapple crabs her arm and drags her to the principal office but before she does she says" class is dismissed."the class floods to the gym and all over ecept the hall with the vending machine.of course they did it works but no snacks fall out ever. i go over to and shake it and my hands spark and the snacks fall out and i grab some of them and stuff them in my bag" what no no yes yes i have super powers!!!!!!!" i jump up and down and the floor gets a dent oops my bad .i grin then run to the mall in seconds after slamming into buldings a couple times. my hair was blown back Again so i pat it down.i dig in my jacket and take out my phone and text zane about my day every detail and he did the same.




Zane

I woke up to the sound of the beetles likeZ every morning and got up and took a shower and when i got out and i tripped , i had my eyes closed then i open them and i was floating in the air"what the."i flail in the air and electricity shoots out of my finger tips hitting the walls and lights and the electricity goes out . i fall to the ground" Fuck what just happened" the electricity comes back on and and i make my bed after getting dressed and eat breakfast and run to school .i get knocked down and see a blur run into class"this day just keeps on get better" i pick my stuff up and when i get to class Ms. Barnstain was dragging Elizabeth out and people flooded out including Jason. Great!!!!!!! Jason always late was there before me. I am told class is dismissed then i run and use the restroom .i come out and the vending machine had snacks around it i pick one up and flames spark out of my hands and i drop the flaming funions bag and run i pull the fire alarm from 5 feet away by just thinking of doing it .school was canceled a few miinutes later and i ran to the park and got a text from Jason and he had a super power filled day to and i text him back about my day

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

please read

Okay, so there's this scene that's been in my head for the past couple of months and I finally wrote it between yesterday and today, but I'm not sure if it's...how do I say this...legit?

Anyway, the basic plot of the scene is this girl who cuts comes home and her parents found out about her cutting. I want to write more, but I'm not sure if I could pull it off because I've never cut before. I was going to post the scene so that I could get some feedback or advice from people who know what it's like, but I don't want to be insensitive to anybody...What do you guys think?

Maybe put a disclaimer on it?

I would be fine with that, and if you want to message with me about it, I would be happy to give you pointers.

You could message me too if you want Sierra.

@Erin and Gabrielle, Okay thank you guys. I'll probably do that at some point. I just didn't want to straight out ask anybody who cuts for feedback because like I said, I don't want to be insensitive.

Yeah, that was good thinking on your part. But as for me... I really don't care. If someone makes fun of it, then I'm definitely going to get mad. But for feedback? I'd love to help you out. Absolutely. I adore writing.

I agree with Gabrielle. That was smart. I am willing to help out and I don't get offended easily

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