Perfect The Way You Are:) discussion

I don't know about you guys but I lovee to write poems and songs:) It helps me express my feelings in ways that sometimes are harder to randomly say, ya know? So I was thinking we could share some of our writings and stuff? It can be a story, drawings, a poem, songs, anything! :)

This is the only one that I have in my laptop the others are in my computer.

I waited and waited
To find some special people
So that I can share with them
special moments of my life

Many people came and went by
like years come and go
You also came and I was delighted
By your precious presence that I never want you to go

You are one of those special people
who has made the moments also special
And made my life worth living
I'll always remember you and treasure those moments

I'm thankful to you
To enlighten my life by your presence
And to God for sending you in my life
And making it memorable
-J

That is very beautiful.

That's wonderful J!! I love it:) your very good!

Meaningless

i saw you staring at me
but tell me why,
you were the one who left me alone
so please don't try.
Yes, i think of you many times a day
then i tell myself, you're the one who made me cry
so tell me why you left me.

now you're eyes ask too many questions
your words want to mean alot
you expect too much.
From someone who is shattered
From someone who deson't mean anything to you anymore.

Your apologies have no feelings.
your words don't have any meaning.
your gaze trying to say so much.
All meaningless, useless
which left a soul heartless.

Very good

Rose your poem is great. My poem can't even show its face to your poem.

Racheal wrote: "That's wonderful J!! I love it:) your very good!"

Demonhunter wrote: "That is very beautiful."

Thanx very much.

U r welcome

Rosie, I love your poem:) it's gorgeous!!! Aha:) I smell talent!?

You talkin bout me or Rose??

Green eyes

I love your green eyes.
Your eyes amaze me.
They shine,
but they never show everything at once.
Only moment by moment.

Why?

Those eyes are mysterious.
They go everywhere and for just a second,
they fall on me.

Their intimidating me, and yet, they melt me.
I must turn away before my eyes burn amongst the beauty of yours.

I am consumed in your eyes with all their wonder.
You have a shimmering light,
burning bright in your eyes.

But what is it?
I am unable to grasp what it is,
I am curious.
They pull me under..

Oh, how I fall for the beauty of those green eyes.
I pick myself up, but only to fall into them...
Once again.

Omg im so sorry guys. I just saw ur comments about my poem. Thank you so much to all of u. I cant possibly say how much that meant to me. So thank you all for the wonderful comments. N to those who say " their poems cant show their face to me.."
Bring it on. I wanna c. I bet ur osm at it.

Racheal. I like green eyes! Something new.

Awe your welcome! It was really good:) had a lot of meaning to it:)

Thank you again. Im glad u liked it.

Rose wrote: "Racheal. I like green eyes! Something new."

Oh, thanks! Aha:)

I smell talent! :)

Rose wrote: "I smell talent! :)"

Lol yes, me too! So glad I'm not the only one ^_^ lol

Lol. Im glad we think alike ;)

You know it ;) ha

Do u write a lot?

Yeh, I have a whole book of poems:) I'm starting to write songs too, what about you?

Same story here but no songs.
Just short stories n poems.

That's cool!!

Part of the reason I'm writing songs is because I LOVE to sing, it's one of my biggest hobbies.

If i sing the world will probably go deaf. Lol. But srsly i cant sing

Ur so talented. U can sing too. Lucky

Lol well you have other talents too!!! :)

I guess we all r born with our share of things :)

Yep:) What else do you like to do?

Dance alot. Wbu?

I like dancing too:)

Hmm, drawing, friends, swimming, running, and bad mitten

Wow. U definitely do alot. I love writing so im always writing stuff. Theres always pages aflyong around my room in my bag n in my books. Lol

Lol :) that's awesome!! What kind of stuff do you write?

Just poems. Alot of poems.
Wbu? What do u wanna do in life?

Hmm, I have no clue lol

Me too.

Hey !

Great. Wbu? :)

Y what happened?

Your head still hurting, Shera?

Racheal wrote: "Green eyes

I love your green eyes.
Your eyes amaze me.
They shine,
but they never show everything at once.
Only moment by moment.

Why?

Those eyes are mysterious.
They go everywhere and for just..."

HAHA! I remember when you wrote that!!! You wrote it for Jay-cee

Rose wrote: "Omg im so sorry guys. I just saw ur comments about my poem. Thank you so much to all of u. I cant possibly say how much that meant to me. So thank you all for the wonderful comments. N to those who..."

I already have post it. you see.......

Rose wrote: "Wow. U definitely do alot. I love writing so im always writing stuff. Theres always pages aflyong around my room in my bag n in my books. Lol"

Its same with me.

b/w GREAT POEM Racheal......*thumbs up*

J wrote: "b/w GREAT POEM Racheal......*thumbs up*"

Thank you!! :)

I have written so many stories on here that it's hard to count :P lol
I've got one that I think is really good :) it's called Hamlet and it'd mean the world if u could read it for me!

https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...

It's got 10 parts so far, but there's still a lot more to the story

Description: Adira is just a regular girl, sorta. Okay, to be totally truthful, she isn't exactly normal. What type of teenage girl hates shopping? What type of teenage girl prefers Doctor Who over whatever stupid vampire show is popular right now? What type of teenage girl has a big, stuffed, electric-blue dragon in her room to "watch over her"? Yeah, it's weird. But, most of all, what type of typical teenage girl sees boys disappear, change, and stop time?
Yeah, as i said before, she's not exactly normal. But, hey, there is no beauty without some strangeness. I'm pretty sure someone important said that

https://www.goodreads.com/story/list/...

Here are the rest of my stories :) i've got: Dots, Married to Save the Kingdom, Sphere, Hamlet, Mayhem, I Don't Think I Do, control, and The Combusted :)

Please read! I need feedback on all of them!

LIFE ON A STAND STILL

It has been never been like this,

not quite sure of what I want

don’t know what more that I need to do,

feels like a soul devoid of life;



One moment my joy knew no bounds,

a new beginning is what I got,

a new meaning to a lonely existence,

I was happy;



As reality dawned on me,

I felt my happiness come crashing down,

all in one big thud,

I wondered if my luck was anything but bad;



I try to find a reason,

I try to find a cure,

I tried all that was possible,

but it feels as if my life has come to a standstill;



I don’t want to give up,

I don’t want to cave in so easily,

So I am desperately plotting my revenge against a life that has become mundane;

(and take control of it once and for all

before I lose my sanity and question my very existence)

Your poem is different. I like that Space Monger, great job:)

SUPER ENTHUSIASM LEVELS RISING!!!!!!
~translation = thanks~