The Wide Web of Friends in YA Books discussion

Post your writing here!! post links, share stories, and more!

I write fanfiction(Though I do have some original stories, but they suck. Fanfiction is more fun anyway XD)


The Third di Angelo: Percy Jackson Fanfiction: http://www.quotev.com/story/3882688/I...

Forever Remember You: HP fanfiction: http://www.quotev.com/story/4345306/F...

And a poem[That I'm VERY proud of..because most of my poems suck]:

Like a Bullet from a Gun: https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...


I'd love constructive criticism and opinions:D

nice! I'll read some now :)

Thanks!!^_^

I have a story going on my blog. It's called The Splash Team and is of fantasy/fiction genre. Check it out! https://www.goodreads.com/author_blog...

My debut novel is also on my page, and available on Amazon. Thanks! https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/2...

Here is my new story

nice! Can't wait to check it out :D

Thanks!!!!!

here's my story : https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...

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The beginning of my first short...
Any of your thoughts would be AMAZING
https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...

Hey guys I put an excerpt of a story I am writing. I'd love your feedback!
https://www.goodreads.com/story/list/...

If someone wants to read my story I need feedback want to put it in the school newspaper.

I'll read it (:

Hey all...here's the Goodreads link to my new book:

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/1...

I am posting an excerpt on my blog:

https://www.goodreads.com/author_blog...

Enjoy!!

https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...

Here is a sample of my writing. I would love if someone would read this for me.

(view spoiler)[I smiled at him a bit. Things couldn’t get better than it already had. Life was really good for me. He stepped in closing the space in between us. He gently put his lips on mine and we officially had out first kiss. I didn’t want it to end if felt like everything was perfect nothing could go wrong. Until he stepped back some.
“How can you kiss me?” He asked looking at me. I was confused on why he was acting like this. He started to circle around me like I was his prey. He bit his lip a little. He light blue eyes pierced my soul. “Come on Alyssa you’re smart one. I’m a monster. ” He said.
I was shocked on why would he call himself a monster nothing was making sense now. “You are not a monster Chris you’re far from that. You have so many great personalities traits compare to most of the guys in America.” I said looking at him.
“I like to kill things. I kill things. I love to hear my victims scream and beg for mercy,” he said as he started back circling me.
The word victims didn’t catch my attention. “So what if you like to hunt? A lot of people like to hunt where I come from.” It was true most people owned guns and loved to hunt in the country. It wasn’t just hobby it was a sport.
“Not animals. I guess you’re not smart as I thought you were Alyssa.” He said with a low dark voice. The sound of his voice sent chills down my spine making the hair on the back of neck rise. I bit my lip a little.
What was he talking about? I started to fit the pieces together. The word victims echoed through my head as I came to realize something. He had some connection to the Jack the Ripper murders. I gulped some. “Chris if you know something about who is killing those people then you need to tell someone.” I said.
“Why would I do that?” He paused and then I saw an evil grin on his face this wasn’t the Chris I knew. “I mean they would be able to connect me to these murders and the other ones.” He said coldly.
I should have ran as fast as I could out of there. He said other ones. I was way too curious for my own being. This wasn’t one of the smartest things I ever done. “What other murders? You mean the original ones? Chris you weren’t alive then.” His grin grew wider when I mentioned it. This wasn’t possible there was no rational explanation for it. He couldn’t have been alive in 1888. He would be over 100 years old.
Part of me wanted to scream. He was so sweet and kind. He helped along so much this past two weeks. I believe he can change. Then there is another part of me that wanted to walk away he did the same thing like my dad did but worse. (hide spoiler)]

I know there is grammar mistakes. This is the first time I wrote it down. I want to know if it is worth writing still.