Children's Book Authors/Illustrators discussion

Hello,
I am new to this group. I have written a picture book on saving water (really the need of the hour!).
I am looking for inputs on the story-the good, the bad and the ugly.
Would really appreciate any inputs I can get. Please let me know if interested and I will mail a pdf copy.

Thanks for your help.
Lakshmi

Lakshmi wrote: "Hello,
I am new to this group. I have written a picture book on saving water (really the need of the hour!).
I am looking for inputs on the story-the good, the bad and the ugly.
Would really appre..."

Hi Lakshmi. I know I am late but If I can help I will be glad to. I am traveling on business on Thursday, October 1st so I could review on the plan. If so let me know.

Donna Maguire