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Open question: Writing for the screen?
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May 02, 2017 09:39AM
As mentioned in Question #1, Hawley has done a number of TV shows. How do you find his writing here in Before the Fall? Does it feel that he's writing this for the small screen/big screen? And if so, how? Give us an example.
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I was aware that Hawley is a screenwriter, but have not watched any of his TV series! I first read his book, The Good Father, and thought it was well written and researched. I'd say the same about this book. It doesn't seem to me to be any more screen-ready than a lot of other books. It is particularly timely in its references to the media and fake news, so it would make a timely TV series. As I read it, I also couldn't help but think about JFK Jr's plane crash off Martha's Vineyard. There are many elements in the novel that would make it compelling television.
I agree with Susan that I could see this book being turned into a TV mini series. Nothing different has jumped out at me to indicate that this author is famous for his screen writing. I do see a lot of his paragraphs "set the scene". It could be because I'm consciously looking for it though. For example, this following paragraph I could picture on the TV screen: (Page 168)
"The bar-Swim!- is defined by low lighting and glowing fish tanks, giving it the look of a mid-1990's sci-fi action movie. He orders a Budwieser (un-ironically) and finds a table behind a big saltwater tank, then watches the door for his man. Sitting behind the tank gives the illusion that he is underwater, and through the glass the room takes on a fun-house-mirror quality-like a hipster bar would look like after the oceans rose and consumed the earth."
"The bar-Swim!- is defined by low lighting and glowing fish tanks, giving it the look of a mid-1990's sci-fi action movie. He orders a Budwieser (un-ironically) and finds a table behind a big saltwater tank, then watches the door for his man. Sitting behind the tank gives the illusion that he is underwater, and through the glass the room takes on a fun-house-mirror quality-like a hipster bar would look like after the oceans rose and consumed the earth."

Well said! There were many times as I'm reading, I thought WOW, I'm not the only one who has those inner thoughts. But would never have been able to express them the way Hawley does!

The most memorable for me would be when the press was asking Scott questions as he left Leslie Mueller's house. I thought it was very entertaining as he danced around the questions and gave what I would call artistic answers.

The question made me wonder if this could be adapted. The layout of the novel delighted me the most as I was reading ... the author leaves it to the reader to weave the threads together. In my opinion - too sophisticated for TV???