Bisky's Twitterling's Scribbles! discussion

I am looking for beta readers to read "Tattooed Teardrops", scheduled for release in August. I would be looking for you to let me know of any structural problems, typos if you noticed any (I'm not expecting a line edit!) and provide a back cover blurb if you are comfortable with it.

Tattooed Teardrops is young adult, contemporary, roughly 80,000 words. I can provide in mobi (kindle), epub (ibooks/nook), pdf, or doc format.

If you are interested, please message me with your e-mail address and what format you would like.

Draft back cover teaser:

“I don’t plan on getting in any trouble.”

Tamara had thought that when she got out of juvie, things would be easier. But before long, it seems like her life is spiraling into chaos.

If she can’t prove to her probation officer that she is innocent of the allegations against her, she’s going back to prison, and Tamara just can’t let that happen.

I'm sorry I don't have time to do a full review for you, but I can help with what you've posted here.

Tamara had thought... delete had

Tamara just can't let that...delete just

Every time you can eliminate either of these words it will make your writing stronger.

I already reviewed it. I liked it. Or did you get it? I'm not sure.

Hmm, I didn't get any comments back from you, Dionne. Glad you enjoyed it! I'd love to hear further details!

Now that's weird. Maybe I put them up where the book is 'advertised' here. I'll go check.

There it is! Thanks so much, Dionne, I really appreciate it.

I wish that Goodreads (and Amazon, for that matter) had a "notification" feature when reviews go up!

Thanks for all of your time and effort. I'll be sure to send you a "final" Kindle version once it is published.

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