The Edits, and Everything Else! discussion

Hey guys ! (: You should all go read my story The World After and tell me what you think of it. It's literally the first story I've ever written (or am writing) and I want feedback and helpful criticism (:
Here's the link:
https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...

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ROFL. I'll check it out ASAP. :)

Aha that comment is looking dapper c; but thanks !

I made changes to chapter 3 ! ^-^

Briana wrote: "I made changes to chapter 3 ! ^-^"

I'll check it out asap XD!

I feel like chapter 5 has more potential but trying to write when I'm never home is kind of hard ._.