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Anthony V 3 WAIT TILL HELEN COMES
This story takes place in a little town and in the country as a family gets ready to move homes and into the country. But the kids don't seem so excited about the idea mostly because its in a church that there going to be living in and because there going to miss the science fair . The kids have really been looking forward to the science fair all year and giving mom and dad a hard time
You'll like it out in the country imagine all the animals , birds and trees you can see out in the country , also you can add more to your insect collection .says mom
So the family was moving at the beginning of june and it was may 23 when they heard the news.

The family had moving in and wow did they think it was amazing ! well the parents did and the kids thought it was creepy because of the way the church was built and they knew something was off .
After a few nights the kids started realizing that things would be out of place or when they would wake up for school the all the kitchen cabinets would be open . Hey ! there's a cemetery back here let's go check it out and so they did but there was this one stone that really caught the attention of their eyes , it was so clean and shiny like a giant diamond but all the other ones where worn out and broken .

Do you think this person recently passed away said the kid ? no look the date it says 1827-1901
And its 2003 how is it still so clean ? and then she touched it and she saw something dark but didn't want to let go .. ( are you ok ? ) yes it's just i saw something ( a ghost ? ) no not that i think i saw a bird .. look over there ! .. oh that dumb bird ( crow )..

I feel like this spirit is going to ring really bad vibes and bad energy to there lives and i think it has to do more with the fact that there living in a church , So i'm really interested and curious to see what's gonna happen to the kids or the family .. also i forgot to mention the stone had 7 names on it and there's more than 1 spirit


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