Beta Reading Group for Marita A. Hansen discussion

These are the final chapters for THE CHEAT. I will send them out in the coming week, after Chapters 5-6. THE CHEERLEADER (Episode 2 of Concussion) will continue the story. Please note that chapter 8 is R18.

I've sent the final chapters of The Cheat to everyone that's commented they're up to date. I will be passing on The Cheat to the editor soon, and will be starting to send out The Cheerleader (episode 2) to anyone that wants to continue reading Concussion (the serial's name).

Oh, my God. Oh, my God. I didn't see this coming.
I couldn't imagine in a million years that Lucy's mom was spying on Riley like that.

I've devoured these chapters as soon as they've shown up on my Kindle and I'm definitely looking forward to more. It seems to me that this story is very short, you have a lot of material to make it a complete book.

Marita, thank you very much for entrusting your work to us. Obviously I want to participate in the continuation, if there is a blog tour I sign up and when the book goes on sale I buy it.

In conclusion: The Cheater is a quite unique plot, with some very complex, interesting and intense characters and some sexy scenes of which I want to read more.

Yes, the scene with the mom definitely threw me for a loop. What a mess!

☺~Tina~☺ wrote: "Yes, the scene with the mom definitely threw me for a loop. What a mess!"

Then you'll be thrown even more by The Cheerleader, lol. That book gets really messy.

Savannah wrote: "Oh, my God. Oh, my God. I didn't see this coming.
I couldn't imagine in a million years that Lucy's mom was spying on Riley like that.

I've devoured these chapters as soon as they've shown up on ..."

Thanks, Savannah, it's an episode (TV-like) series, so each of the books will be about the same size, Once I have 5 episodes they will be put into a collection, which will be like a large book.

Wow! I didn’t expect that! Omg I can’t wait to see what is going to happen!

I really love how the things are wetting messy!

Julieta wrote: "Wow! I didn’t expect that! Omg I can’t wait to see what is going to happen!

I really love how the things are wetting messy!"

Thanks :) I can send through the first two chapters of The Cheerleader if you want them straight away. I will be sending out Chapter 3 to everyone by the end of tomorrow, at the latest. I'm running a bit behind with that one.

Omg the temptation ahhhh! But I prefer to wait 😂 I can’t read right now the chapters as I want and I don’t want to let you waiting for a review 🙈

Julieta wrote: "Omg the temptation ahhhh! But I prefer to wait 😂 I can’t read right now the chapters as I want and I don’t want to let you waiting for a review 🙈"

No worries :)