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message 1: by Jason (new)

Jason Hein (jasonphein) | 216 comments Mod
I figured since it is feedback (though on a website not just writing) this might fit in this catagory. Hope it's good here.

I just wanted to share the website Joshua M Hein has helped me put together for my books.

Take a look and let me know what you think. Any feedback would be helpful so we know anything that needs to be changed or edited. From personal preference to spelling and grammar corrections feel free to speak up!

Any help is much appreciated!

http://varsiankingdom.com/


message 2: by Lena, Shot through the heart, and you're to blame (last edited Jan 11, 2015 06:48PM) (new)

Lena (lenakarynn) | 1526 comments Mod
This is a fine place for it!

I really like the site!! I think it's neat how you have it from the point of view of a character. Ease of reading is slightly hindered by the font, but I think it's a cool font anyway. Great job! (Give your brother a pat on the back, too) ;)


message 3: by Jason (new)

Jason Hein (jasonphein) | 216 comments Mod
Thanks. :)

I had wondered about the font. In you opinion should it maybe be changed to a more clear font?


message 4: by Lena, Shot through the heart, and you're to blame (new)

Lena (lenakarynn) | 1526 comments Mod
I don't know... I really like the style, it's just kinda hard to read... A clearer font might be better, though


message 5: by Jason (new)

Jason Hein (jasonphein) | 216 comments Mod
Yeah, that's kind of where I was at. I'll see if I can get some more people to give an opinion on it.


message 6: by Melody (new)

Melody Jackson (melodyjacksonauthor) | 51 comments I like it! But I do agree the font is kind of hard to read; I had to read that last name really slowly to figure out what it was, haha. But it's a really cool idea, especially having it done by the character!


message 7: by Jason (new)

Jason Hein (jasonphein) | 216 comments Mod
Thanks. :)

I actually had another person who said they liked the font being that way and didn't think I should change it so now I am betwixed and between. LOL

Thanks for checking it out and giving your opinion though! Appreciate it a lot.


message 8: by Jason (new)

Jason Hein (jasonphein) | 216 comments Mod
I have edited the font.

They really don't have a font that is what I was looking for and apparently wix does not let you upload your own fonts at this point.

Let me know what you think.


message 9: by Lena, Shot through the heart, and you're to blame (new)

Lena (lenakarynn) | 1526 comments Mod
I did like the old font, but this one is much easier to read!! And the larger font is very cool!


message 10: by Melody (new)

Melody Jackson (melodyjacksonauthor) | 51 comments Oh, I DEFINITELY like this one more. :) The other was cool, but hard to read, and not only is this easier to read, but it still kind of seems to fit with the whole fantasy feel, if you know what I mean.


message 11: by Jason (new)

Jason Hein (jasonphein) | 216 comments Mod
Cool, thanks for the follow up review you guys!

Yeah, I was thankful they had that font option because it was the only one from their list that I liked for the site.


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