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Sep 13, 2021 10:50PM

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Disclaimer: This story includes disability, a car accident, a brief mention of a suspected suicide (no attempt or explicit ideation is included, nor is an actual death), a brief mention of assault, a brief mention of a plane crash, a brief mention of cancer, and a brief mention of childhood abuse
Here is the link: https://musingsofanarthriticartist.bl...

In order of first appearance:
Izara: A village girl with chronic pain who has the ability to heal others
Amira: A girl who lives in the palace who enjoys sneaking out at night to protect the villagers
Kadiri: A boy who wishes to be a member of the King's Guard
Kalil: Amira's older brother who is hated by the king (for some mysterious reason XD)
It takes place in Castesia, a world with six kingdoms: Alcala, Athol, Elyria, Ephrata, Havelock, and Ocona
Izara, Amira, Kadiri, and Kalil all live in Elyria.
TW: this story includes chronic pain (obviously), childhood abuse, brief mentions of assault, violence (not gore), fantasy illnesses that mimic mental illness (I can't use the term c-PTSD in a fantasy novel), and torture
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1E...
I'd love feedback! =D

This is a short, horror/thriller/speculative fiction piece I wrote for a contest a few weeks ago. Any feedback or critique is totally appreciated! Thank you all for viewing!
Triggers: shadows, storms, losing consciousness