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Ok.... so does anyone write?? i do but i dont want to be the first to post XD
Umm i do kinda but mostly collaborative and nothing’s worked out…
Followed you and put it on my read later list~
Here’s a story I
PrologueThe first thing happened right in front of my eyes. It was also the worst. I saw as the humans took my mother away. I heard her in the distance stomping, trying to get free. She had told me to run away as far as I could and then hide. She had said that to my older siblings too. But my siblings were stuck. They were too worried to run. But weak as I always had been, I loved mom and always did as she said. So I ran, and did not stop until I found a big bush,where, using my powerful legs, I made a deep burrow. I stayed there for days, maybe weeks, I don’t know. It was then there was a wildfire. It was spreading quickly. I came out of my burrow and looked around. I was surrounded by orange, yellow, and white flames. There was only one animal still in the forest, except for me, a little fox cub. But when she looked at me I saw the fear in her eyes, and knew she was not like the foxes that tried to eat us the other day. I saw she was kind, not just afraid. So, thinking fast I pushed her into my burrow and kicked at the dirt so that the entrance closed. It was dark but we could still hear each other. “Thanks.” The fox said. Her voice was squeaky. I could not tell if it was because she was scared, or if it was her normal voice. I decided to get to know the fox cub. “What’s your name? I’m Dream.” “My name is Luna.” The fox cub said. “My family has always been different,” she continued her voice now without a squeak. “My mother never taught us to hunt, only to gather. My favorite food is blueberries. I can show you my favorite spot. It’s right outside of the forest. But far enough it should have survived the fire.” She added. “Sure but let’s wait for the fire to burn out. In the meantime we can get to know each other.” I said, I told her everything. About how my mom had let us stay in the burrow for a little over a year, instead of a week. About how the humans had taken my mother away. About how I was the only one that wasn’t glued to the spot. And lastly about how I suspect that it was the humans that started the fire. Then it was her turn. She told me about how she once woke up without her mother and only saw human footprints leading away. About how she heard her mother telling her to run, and that the humans had her. About how she ran in the wrong direction when the fire started. And how she agreed with me that the humans started the fire.
Chapter One
It had been a while since I had met the little brown rabbit. Everything was going good, that is until I smelled a familiar smell. And let me tell you, it was not a good thing. It was getting stronger. I suddenly told Dream to start heading south instead of east, where my place was. But it was too late. The bully of my old class, Stella, had pounced. I started running as fast as I could in an easterly direction. As I ran I yelled three words over my shoulder just in case: “East, close, listen” and then I scratched a rock I was passing. When I was far enough away I stopped to look around me. As suspected, Dream had not made it. Now all I could do was continue and hope. Hope that Dream was smart enough. Hope that Stella and her family were not. Hope that Stella and her family still did that thing that they brag about their catch for a whole day before eating it. Hope that what I was smelling was blueberries, razzberries, strawberries, and green grass. I sniffed again. One of my hopes was crossed off the list. I was there. Finally. I ran through the forest. Going the secret way my mother had taught me, inside the ring of raspberry bushes. I stress ate. I ate all of the strawberries that were overripe. Then I collapsed on the warm grass in the sun and slept. I was still worried, and I had nightmares. The first one was that Dream came, but she was followed by humans. They caught her, took her away, and then they came back, burned down all that was left of nature in the whole world, and then came back for me. The second nightmare was that Stella and her family worked with the humans and then they destroyed everything I had ever known or loved, along with me. My third dream was a good one, at least halfway, Stella’s mom got taken away from her, she found me and Dream and helped us stop the humans. When I woke up it was dusk. To see if Dream had successfully gotten away from Stella’s family, I scratched a stone and sniffed the air to see if I could smell bunny. Specifically Dream. I didn’t. I could still only hope. The next few days were spent scratching the rock every two seconds. Eventually there was almost nothing left of the rock, so I decided to head back and see if I could find her, maybe she had not heard the first word I said. So I set off in a westerly direction.
Chapter Two
I kept Luna’s words in my head: East, Close and Listen and then she had scratched a rock. I think I know what they mean so I kept my ears open. I had managed to escape from the foxes running west and as soon as I was safe and the foxes lost my scent I headed east, making sure to stay underground unless I was eating. I don’t know how but I could tell which way was east, without the sun. I guess I just felt it. After what must have been a few days I heard a scratching sound, almost like on a stone. So I dug my way up like I had been doing when I was eating, and I headed towards the sound. I saw a bunch of raspberry bushes. They looked like a giant wall. I dug a hole and kicked the wall so that no one could follow me. The scratching had stopped. I kept digging until I was sure the raspberry bushes weren’t over me anymore. When I got there it truly was amazing there was almost any kind of berries that anyone could think of, blueberries, strawberries, razzberries, lingon, blackberries and wild strawberries and… well, I could go on for days. I ran around the whole place, finding all of the little nooks and crannies. But Luna was nowhere to be seen. But then I saw a note scratched into the dirt in one of the nooks. It said:
Headed west looking for you.
if you see this,
simply say our code word;)
At first I was confused, we had never made any sort of code word. But then I realized that Luna was smarter than that. So I said:
“Our code word.” I said it a couple times, but then it started getting darker, so I slept. Tomorrow I said ‘our code word’ around once every hour.
Chapter Three
The birds were tweeting about a crazy rabbit saying ‘our code word’ every hour or so.
“Which direction?” I asked.
“Oh, east, but she is staying at a great spot. Only we birds can come in there!” “Of course, I don’t like crazy food anyways.”
“You must be a fairly confident hunter to say that.”
“I was just wondering if that faint smell of bunny to the east was the crazy one, wouldn’t want to waste my time!”
“Of course not.” The little bird flew off to do his own things.
Its so great!love the perspercive
I personally think the plot is dry and you find out too much right away and everything turns out good and— well you get it.But if you like it/would like to use it you have my permission
Daysi wrote: "I personally think the plot is dry and you find out too much right away and everything turns out good and— well you get it.But if you like it/would like to use it you have my permission"
its very expressive its also very impressive considering your first language isnt English!
Thanks!Also, my first language is English, I moved from the US at 9 years old. But I wrote this when I was 9-10 so—
ok heres one of mineI grew up thinking that there was only one Universe, dimension, Multiverse whatever you call it.
But on my 16th birthday my world changed. I was thrust into a world full of things I never asked to be involved in; people who looked like everyone I knew but with completely different attitudes and personalities, a world where Charles Darwin's theory of evolution had been reversed, or the worst one- a utopia. No war, No problems. Just a great world. Supposedly.
Before I knew that these worlds existed I had lived in a world where I was the geeky kid in the back of the class, Aylin Cromwreathe. The kid with exceptional grades, the one who was obsessed with books and was never seen without one, the kid that didn't fit in, and let me tell you at high school that definitely isn't a good thing. You need to be part of a cliqúe, at my school there were 6 main groups
No One else can use thanks since its a WIP
what do you think i could improve on?
Is that the whole story? Just a start? A summary?
its just the start, i had the idea from marvel after i watched dr strange and the multiverse of madness and now ive stopped writing for a few days worked on my art and now am going back to my writing. i might develop it into a book but i might not
Daysi wrote: "PrologueThe first thing happened right in front of my eyes. It was also the worst. I saw as the humans took my mother away. I heard her in the distance stomping, trying to get free. She had told m..."
LOVE THIS! You're really good.
I am working on a novel about a boy whose mother is a sort of protector of their world but she goes missing and ten years later he decides to try to find her(or find out what happened to her...)
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https://www.quotev.com/story/15178631...
Lol, I read the first chapter before. It’s great XD
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My bestie and I were calling each other yesterday, and she read it. She was laughing so hard she couldn’t read it out loud correctly XD
There is a different topic for that, I can link it in just a sec if you want
A quote from my book i'm writing :)“This is because of the lying thief’s of the night,” he had told the prince. “Don’t ever open the window at night. If you do The Men will climb in, and you will no longer be a prince. You will be a lowlife commoner. The Men will take all of our gold, all of our riches. We will be left with nothing, and what is a king with nothing? Well, not a king at all.” Then the padlock was locked tight, and the curtains pulled across.
Attention all writers!! I've begin working on my novel The Puppet Prince I'm planning on having it switch pov's. If your interested in hearing more about the novel please DM me! I can send you what I have done of prologue and the part you would play in the writing. I use Reedsy, so please make sure you have an account on there before DMing me!!
This is a fanfiction from the series Fate made by TYPE-MOON it is a W.I.P and all characters in this Exact story belong to me, but tell me what you thinkThe Summoning
Kagami Uragirimono is recommended for the War by the Magus Association. They summon Norwarto & Neza in the Saber class. Norwarto & Neza asks Kagami Uragirimono to refer to them using their class name, even when they are alone. As Kagami Uragirimono is relatively clueless about what is going on, Norwarto & Neza tries to explain everything they can about the War and the Holy Grail. Kagami Uragirimono and Norwarto & Neza talk about their respective wishes for the Grail.
Kaze Ita summons Sandbado in the Archer class. Kaze Ita is shocked to see that their Servant's appearance is different to what is recorded in history. Kaze Ita sets up an additional hideout at an abandoned mansion.
Momoku Maho goes to the city centre to perform the summoning ritual. They summon Hirokku in the Lancer class. As Momoku Maho is relatively clueless about what is going on, Hirokku tries to explain everything they can about the War and the Holy Grail. They talk about their respective wishes for the Grail.
Mizu Meji is randomly chosen by the Grail to be a Master. They summon Umihebi in the Rider class. Umihebi plans to deceive the other Servants by pretending to be Okada Izo. Mizu Meji sets up spells around their base in order to ward off enemies. They find they are unable to get along due to conflicting personalities.
Shujin Kyastua is randomly chosen by the Grail to be a Master. They summon Ketsuki in the Caster class. Ketsuki plans to deceive the other Servants by pretending to be in the Berserker class.
Infernuo Asashin goes to a construction site to perform the summoning ritual. They summon Karito in the Assassin class. Infernuo Asashin finds themself feeling fascinated by their Servant.
Kaze Koshinuke summons Kamisama in the Berserker class. They get into an argument over differing ideologies.
Day 1
Kaze Ita and Shujin Kyastua meet together at the temple. When Shujin Kyastua enters the area, Sandbado suddenly attacks them. Shujin Kyastua uses a command spell to instantly summon Ketsuki to their side.
Sandbado shoots Ketsuki's weak spot. Ketsuki casts a spell that drains their opponent of their energy. Sandbado shoots Ketsuki in the arm, inflicting a minor wound. Sandbado rushes at Ketsuki and shoots an arrow at their head. Ketsuki catches Sandbado off guard and blasts them right in the heart.
Sandbado has been defeated.
Shujin Kyastua buys clothes for Ketsuki to wear in their civilian disguise. They introduce their Servant to other people as their lover.
Hirokku explores the city to get more familiar with the layout of the city. They discover traces of magical activity at the forest.
Fearful that other Masters might target them now that they no longer have a Servant, Kaze Ita flees to the church to seek asylum.
Kamisama and Kaze Koshinuke return to their hideout to rest. Thinking their base isn't safe to stay in anymore, Kaze Koshinuke makes plans to move to an underground bunker. Kaze Koshinuke asks Kamisama more about their life, and they get to know one another better.
Day 2
Ketsuki tells Norwarto & Neza to join forces with them or perish. Norwarto & Neza refuses, so Ketsuki attacks them.
Norwarto & Neza stabs their sword at Ketsuki, but the attack is deflected by their armour. Ketsuki casts an ice bolt at Norwarto & Neza, inflicting a minor wound. Norwarto & Neza slashes their sword at Ketsuki, but Ketsuki parries the blow. They break off the fight when they notice that another Servant is spying on their battle.
Thinking their base isn't safe to stay at anymore, Shujin Kyastua moves their base to the church.
Shujin Kyastua is patrolling the city when they come across Mizu Meji. Mizu Meji offers to form an alliance with Shujin Kyastua, but Shujin Kyastua declines.
Momoku Maho sets up a bounded field at the central plaza to gather magical energy. They cleverly disguise the bounded field to prevent other magi from detecting it.
Kamisama and Kaze Koshinuke return home to rest. Kamisama suggests to Kaze Koshinuke that they form an alliance with the Master of Rider. They discuss the enemy Servants and Masters. Kamisama reaffirms their vow to fight as Kaze Koshinuke's Servant. Kamisama says they think they recognise the Rider Servant.
Day 3
Kamisama slaughters an entire family and drinks their blood. Their bodies are not discovered until half a day later.
Kagami Uragirimono and Norwarto & Neza launch an attack on Shujin Kyastua's base. Shujin Kyastua and Ketsuki head out to fight them.
Shujin Kyastua casts a healing spell on Ketsuki. Norwarto & Neza makes a sweeping motion at Ketsuki's feet, throwing them off balance. Norwarto & Neza slashes Ketsuki's weak spot. Seeing no way to escape this battle without putting Kagami Uragirimono in danger, Norwarto & Neza opts to do a suicidal attack. However, Ketsuki manages to barely survive with heavy injuries.
Norwarto & Neza has perished.
Shujin Kyastua and Ketsuki happen to run across Kaze Koshinuke and Kamisama, who immediately engage them in battle.
Kamisama rushes at Ketsuki and strikes them in the head. Kamisama smashes their weapon at Ketsuki's head, inflicting a minor wound. They stop their battle when they are almost discovered by civilians.
Infernuo Asashin challenges Kaze Koshinuke to a battle to see which of their Servants is stronger. Infernuo Asashin sets up a bounded field over the area so that no outsiders would be able to see or interfere with the fight.
Kamisama swings their weapon at Karito, but the attack is deflected by their armour. Kamisama slashes their weapon at Karito's ear, inflicting a major wound. Each side decides to withdraw when they realise they have reached a stalemate.
Weary from the long day, Kamisama and Kaze Koshinuke go back home to rest. Thinking their base isn't safe to stay in anymore, Kaze Koshinuke makes plans to move to the Tohsaka Residence. Kamisama tells their Master that they have discovered that there is a Servant staying at the temple. Kamisama reaffirms their vow to fight as Kaze Koshinuke's Servant.
Day 4
Umihebi slaughters an entire family and drinks their blood. Their bodies are not discovered until half a day later.
Hirokku breaks into Kaze Koshinuke's base. They explore the place, and find out about Kaze Koshinuke's plans to do something at Einzbern castle. Finally, Hirokku blows up the base, intending to kill everyone inside. However, Kaze Koshinuke and Kamisama are able to shield themselves and escape from the explosion.
Karito and Ketsuki team up to attack Kaze Koshinuke's base. Kaze Koshinuke and Kamisama head out to fight them.
Ketsuki teleports behind Kamisama. Kamisama slashes their weapon at Karito, but Karito deflects the attack. Karito deals Kamisama a minor wound in the groin. Ketsuki casts a healing spell on themself. Noticing they are heavily injured, Ketsuki flees from the battle. The other two Servants also run off when they notice Ketsuki escaping.
Karito discovers Mizu Meji's base. They get caught in a trap and take minor damage, and discover information about Umihebi's weaknesses. Finally, Karito hides a bug in the base so that they can continue to spy on Mizu Meji and Umihebi.
Shujin Kyastua invites Infernuo Asashin to meet them without their Servant at the park. Suspecting a trap, Infernuo Asashin decides not to show up.
Day 5
Local residents discover a heap of rubble at the forest.
Kaze Koshinuke and Kamisama launch an attack on Mizu Meji's base. Mizu Meji and Umihebi head out to fight them.
Kamisama swings their weapon at Umihebi, but Umihebi deflects the attack. Kaze Koshinuke casts a healing spell on Kamisama. Umihebi stabs Kamisama in the leg, inflicting a minor wound. Umihebi swings their weapon at Kamisama, but Kamisama dodges the attack. They stop their battle when the supervisor arrives and gives them an order to cease, before the fight attracts too much attention.
Local residents discover a charred corpse at an office building. Panic begins to spread through the city.
Local residents discover a heap of rubble at the bridge.
Shujin Kyastua asks for Mizu Meji to meet with them at their base. Shujin Kyastua offers to form an alliance with Mizu Meji and Mizu Meji accepts. They agree to help each other if they are attacked.
Day 6
Hirokku comes across Umihebi and challenges them to a fight. Umihebi declines however, noticing another Servant hanging about nearby looking for the chance to interfere.
Kamisama challenges Hirokku and Karito to a fight. The three servants battle while their masters cast support spells from the sidelines.
Hirokku stabs their spear at Karito, but Karito blocks the attack with their weapon. Hirokku stabs their spear at Karito's weak spot. Hirokku strikes Kamisama in the stomach, inflicting a major wound. While the Servants are fighting, a civilian walks in on the battle. Kamisama stops the battle to go to eliminate the witness.
Feeling dejected after the defeat of their Servant, Kagami Uragirimono returns home, leaving the Grail War behind them.
Local residents discover a heap of rubble at the harbour.
Umihebi breaks into Momoku Maho's base. They find out about Momoku Maho's plans to attack Infernuo Asashin, and destroy Momoku Maho's magical instruments and tools. Umihebi leaves when Mizu Meji orders them to return home immediately.
Day 7
Hirokku comes across Umihebi and challenges them to a fight. Umihebi declines however, noticing another Servant hanging about nearby looking for the chance to interfere.
Kamisama challenges Hirokku and Karito to a fight. The three servants battle while their masters cast support spells from the sidelines.
Hirokku stabs their spear at Karito, but Karito blocks the attack with their weapon. Hirokku stabs their spear at Karito's weak spot. Hirokku strikes Kamisama in the stomach, inflicting a major wound. While the Servants are fighting, a civilian walks in on the battle. Kamisama stops the battle to go to eliminate the witness.
Feeling dejected after the defeat of their Servant, Kagami Uragirimono returns home, leaving the Grail War behind them.
Local residents discover a heap of rubble at the harbour.
Umihebi breaks into Momoku Maho's base. They find out about Momoku Maho's plans to attack Infernuo Asashin, and destroy Momoku Maho's magical instruments and tools. Umihebi leaves when Mizu Meji orders them to return home immediately.
Day 8
While Umihebi is out scouting, Ketsuki attacks Mizu Meji in their base. Umihebi is left without a Master to supply them with magical energy and fades away.
Umihebi has perished.
Kaze Koshinuke and Kamisama launch an attack on Infernuo Asashin's base. Infernuo Asashin and Karito head out to fight them.
Kamisama swings their weapon at Karito's weak spot. Kamisama strikes Karito in the butt, inflicting a minor wound. Kamisama unleashes their Noble Phantasm at Karito, who is unable to dodge.
Karito has been defeated.
Shujin Kyastua sets up a bounded field at a shopping mall to gather magical energy.
Kamisama sneaks into Momoku Maho's base. They find the catalyst that was used to summon Hirokku, and accidentally knock over a vase. Finally, Kamisama uses their Noble Phantasm to destroy the base, killing everyone inside.
Hirokku has been defeated.
Ketsuki and Shujin Kyastua retreat for the night. Shujin Kyastua calls their relatives to assure them that they are still alive. Shujin Kyastua heals some of Ketsuki's minor wounds.
((Part 1 because of word count))
((Continued))Kamisama and Ketsuki meet at the Centre Building for the final battle.
Kamisama swings their weapon at Ketsuki, but Ketsuki uses a skill to evade the attack. Ketsuki casts a spell that drains their opponent of their energy. Ketsuki casts a spell to slow their opponent's movement speed. Kamisama rushes at Ketsuki and kicks them in the butt. Ketsuki casts a fire ball at Kamisama, inflicting a major wound. Ketsuki catches Kamisama off guard and blasts them right in the heart.
Kamisama has been defeated.
The Grail War is over
With all the other Servants defeated, Ketsuki emerges victorious. Shujin Kyastua relinquishes their chance for what they desire to allow Ketsuki to make their wish upon the Grail.
Once upon a time there was a greedy king. The King stole and cheated in order to get his way. He believed that anything he did was good. That he was chosen by God to be the King of this country. This particular greedy king had a wife. The fairest Lady in all of the land. But the King did not love her, for this king was so greedy that he kept his heart closed off completely. He couldn’t even share his love. The wife became the Queen, and the queen had only a single child. That child was said to be the most handsome prince to have ever been born. The Greedy king noticed his child. He got the best academic teachers, The nicest Nanny’s, the nicest things. He shared with the child. He no longer kept his heart to himself. At least…. That’s what it seemed like on the outside. Inside the castle walls the servants and rats whispered to each other. The boy would grow to be strong. The boy would grow to take back the kingdom from the king. The King eventually caught wind of these rumors. And he did not take kindly.
When The Prince turned 21, The King would be asked to step down from his throne to hand it to his son. To his subjects, this seems like the saving grace they had been waiting for. But the King wouldn’t give up his influence or power that easily. No, He was too greedy.
So, The Prince grew up spoiled. He had only the most lavish lifestyle. He wanted for nothing, and knew nothing either. His head stuffed with cotton, his blood made of straw, a puppet raised for the King to use as he wanted. As time went on, as it does, the citizens of the kingdom began to lose hope that their saving grace had came. After all, The King was finally sharing. But he was sharing all his worst qualities. Molding his Son into the perfect Puppet to control the kingdom when he was forced to step down.
The Prince grew up ignorant to the outside world and the problems he would face when he became king. After all, his father would help him through his rule. He didn’t need to know anything according to the King. And of course, The king was always right.
Time went by. The Prince got older. Years went by, and the King’s manipulation and his influence weighed heavy on the prince’s shoulders. But he dare not go against his fathers will. Because the king was always, always right.
Every night he had locked the Prince’s window up tight and pulled the curtains closed. “This is because of the lying thief’s of the night,” he had told the prince. “Don’t ever open the window at night. If you do The Men will climb in, and you will no longer be a prince. You will be a lowlife commoner. The Men will take all of our gold, all of our riches. We will be left with nothing, and what is a king with nothing? Well, not a king at all.” Then the padlock was locked tight, and the curtains pulled across.
The Door was also locked. “To keep snooping servants away,” The king had reasoned with his son when he had asked him why. At the time it seemed reasonable.. after all, the servant staff was made up of commoners, and commoners were dangerous.
“Commoners cannot be trusted with their own money.” The King taught the prince one day. “So we must keep it for them. We take the money and they keep their lives. Their freedom. We must also take the crops. We store them here and ration them out.” The Prince agreed with him at the time. After all, those silly peasants would eat everything in a day if they had full control over their crops. Well, That’s what his father taught him anyways. But what if he didn’t want too do that? He had asked his father one day when he was a bit older. “After all, the peasants grow the crops, and already give up half of their crops to use for taxes. If they want to starve themselves because they cannot ration out their food properly, how is that our fault?”
“Well, If they starve themselves then we won’t have any subjects. And what is a king without his subjects?” He asks the child.
“Not a king at all.” He repeats back.
By the time the Prince was 10, he was well trained to listen to everything his father said and told to him. But this is where the Queen comes back in. It was late at night, and his father had already locked his door and slid the padlock into place. She was a smart lady though, the Queen. She had made a copy of the key a few years back. When the Prince was first moved into the room. Had left her side for the first time. After that, the Prince had turned to the king. Had trusted him more. Listened to the advice that would send the country further down into a spiraling hole of death, destruction, and war. So she did what she knew how to do as all the years of being the greedy King’s wife. She wandered around, pretended to be innocent, to be free of any burdens. But in reality, she was planning, plotting. Always the trickster she was.
She was born of a low class, but her beauty was so grand that she was stolen away from her birth family, brought to the castle as a noble, forced to marry the greedy King at the age of 16. He was 32. But she was smart, and played along, played her cards to survive.
But anyways, this is off track. The Queen went to the Prince’s room. The queen took the Prince outside. She broke the rules. She took him too the village below.
“Mother..? Why are we here?” The prince had asked as they walked down the gravel paths. “Father wouldn’t like it if he were to find out you brought me outside the castle walls..” He tries to reason, wanting to go back to sleep in his safe room. Commoners were beneath him, and he didn’t need to be here.
“Because… You need to learn what will happen if you continue to follow in your fathers footsteps, if you trust his guidance, if you soak up his influence like a sponge and think nothing for yourself” She replies sternly, walking through the court. Broken tiles and bits of scrap lined the sidewalk, getting in their way.
“Why do they not take care of their streets mother?”
“They haven’t the time or the money.”
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Thank you for the feedback the Fate series by TYPE-MOOnN is complicated as I stated is a work in progress but I will check out LEGEND BORN and the character's backstories will show up more as I work more on this
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A little Harry potter fanfictionEverybody just assumed we were friends. Nothing more, nothing less. They were wrong. We were like brothers. And after that night, more. My name Is Remus Lupin. I am a werewolf and I am as straight as a circle.
It was Christmas day. Seventh Year. Padfoot woke me up what felt like seconds after I finally fell asleep.
“Moony! Get Up It’s Bloody Christmas!”
I groan. “Get off Sirius, It's 3am.”
I hear James’ voice pipe up too “actually it's 8am”
I rub my eyes and see both James and Sirius, My best friends standing over me, smiling widely. “Fine” I grumble and sit up.
“We. have. Presents. Get UP”
They both take me by my arms and pull me out of bed. “Chill out!” I say laughing
“Fin-ALLY” Sirius says and we all kneel by the end of my bed and i look around to see that they’ve already opened theirs,
“Wait. Padfoot I haven't even shown you this” James said. He fishes a ring from his back pocket and shows it to Padfoot and I.
“Holy crap” Sirius says, taking the ring from James and examining it, the gold ring reflecting in his gray eyes “I'm guessing Evans gave this to you?”
“Yep!” James says happily, taking the ring back and putting it on his ring finger.
“C’mon Let's OPEN THE PRESENTS”
We unwrap my presents. I get the usual stuff from Mum and Dad, Stuff from my Sister back at home. James gives me a New journal with a silhouette of a werewolf on the front cover and bold lettering stating My furry little problem, Sirius laughs “VERY conspicuous Prongs,”,
“ I saw you were running out.” He shrugged. “And I liked the design!”
“How did you even get this?” I ask turning the journal over, “They don't make them flourish and blotts!”
He opens the front cover and i see that in james’ familiar scrawl he’d written
Evans Did this. I can't do it as well as her.
I laugh. “I can thank Lily,” I was the only one in our group that called her By her first name. It was always Evans, for the others. And once- on accident apparently ‘Doe’ from james
Peter gives me sweets from honeydukes, and Sirius- Nothing.
My heart drops. Before I can give a response to his lack of gift. He touches my arm and softly says “I’m gonna give you your gift later”
My heart rises, why not now, is it because of….James? What could he want to give me that James can't see?
theres more but i cant copy and paste it all
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Omg really? Its a wolfstar ship story
this is really great!
Thanks, but it took me a LONG time to do it
nope. all op my writing takes SO LONG TO Do
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