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Exactly!


I agree with you all. I wanted more from Aidan's firing of Emily...a big, exploding scene. It was kind of thrown in as a second thought...oh yeah, Emily's gone kind of thing. I honestly kept expecting Emily to get tangled up in things more than she did. She was petty and extremely disrespectful, but I thought maybe she'd end up in the whole murder thing.


I guess I am too :0

I did expect Emily to be the first one killed; then they mentioned that she wasn't on the murder list. I hoped that the killer overheard the phone conversation with Emily. I wanted blood.
I wanted more than a sentence that Emily was fired too. Garwood missed a big opportunity here. I wonder if some of these misses are the result of editing. Publishers spend too much time counting pages instead of ensuring questions are answered.