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Unable to carry on in London high society after their brother’s death, overprotective aristocrat Ambrose Bancroft and his increasingly unstable sister Mattie must retreat to their country estate where a mysterious room draws Mattie into another realm; but when Ambrose discovers the vanishing room’s dark secret, he must grapple with his failure to care for Mattie’s feelings before she’s lost to him forever.

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"A Voracious Grief" is available in paperback and ebook. If you would like to read a sample before deciding to review, please just email me for the first three chapters.
lindsey@lindseylamh.com

If you like suspense, dark fantasy, plot twists, and deep psychological dives into characters, you'll love my book. It combines the ambiance of a Jane Eyre setting with compelling characters such as those you'd find in a Jane Austen novel. There's also Dickenson poetry as the chapter epitaphs!

Feel free to email me with any questions. If you're part of a book club, I have a book club bundle and discount available as well. Thank you~

Lindsey

Hello, colleagues.

CRITIQUE NEEDED

I have a 10-page first chapter that I need someone to read and critique for me. I need to know what's missing, what's not working, what haven't I covered that a reader would need to know in this new family saga. Consider this literary fiction, and remember the prose of this genre can be longwinded at times.

I need you to make suggestions and corrections within the text. In a different font color other than black.

Please let me know if you have time to read this and provide a quick turnaround.

Thanks.

Donna B. Comeaux
https://rb.gy/b7fwne

Donna wrote: "Hello, colleagues.

CRITIQUE NEEDED

I have a 10-page first chapter that I need someone to read and critique for me. I need to know what's missing, what's not working, what haven't I covered that ..."

If you're still looking for feedback, I'm happy to do it