Beta Reading and Editing discussion

Hi! My name is Maria Ysern

I have always been interested in writing but only dabbled in creative writing in college. Recently I fell into the wonderful rabbit hole of fantasy and have not looked back. I have always written recreationally, but this is the first manuscript I have completed and want to publish.

I drafted a story with the possibility for a series, but I know it should be able to stand on its own. It is a quest story that attempts at world building. I hope to be able to convey adventure and romance while keeping the story polished.

Blurb:

Orla is living a life of idleness in a secluded village. When a curse threatening to end the fae is unearthed, she must travel through the world of Stellara in hopes of destroying its root.

Lost in a world she never knew outside her village, she stumbles upon a bounty hunter who is her only hope in breaking through the wards of the realms. On her journey through Stellara, she must evade menacing creatures, vagrants, hunters, an infamous dragon, and most dangerous of all...the growing attraction to a human who'd sooner sell her for what she is.

As Orla is thrown into a whirlwind quest to save the fae, she discovers that her knowledge of the four realms is only beginning to unravel.

Hello Maria,

Oh I love love love this and it sounds so good! This is definitely my kind of jam and I would be happy to read about Orla's adventure.

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Hi (fellow) Maria!

Your story sounds intriguing! Fantasy is my favourite genre. I would love to beta read for you. Here's my website:

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You can email me at: mariaslmk31@gmail.com !

btw congrats on your first manuscript!! ✨ Hopefully many more to come 💜

Hi Maria,

Fabulous! Congratulations on completing your manuscript! I'm a published author on Amazon, and the feeling of finally getting your story out into the world is exhilarating.

If you need another set of eyes on your manuscript, I have an opening and would love to provide feedback on your project.

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1. I read your submission cover to cover and give feedback on the structural strengths, weaknesses, inconsistencies, and noted errors.
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• Opening Scene
• Characterisation and Motivation
• Plot and Conflict
• Pacing
• Setting and Worldbuilding
• Dialogue
• Craft
• Overall Impression
• And more

Why trust me with your project?

I am a copywriter, editor, and natural storyteller. I am also an Indie Author, published on Amazon in the Juvenile Fiction genre. I have been collaborating with Writers and Authors on their book projects since 2014 and am familiar with the essential elements of the publishing process.

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I can't wait to read your story!

this is pretty old, but if you're still looking for beta readers, let me know. Send me a DM (and make sure you can receive DMs as well)

Hey Maria, I hope you're still looking for more readers because I am just a bit too interested in you book. I would love to give it a read and give you thou=rough feedback.

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