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That being said, I was SO excited to read this book because every single Bookstagram account I follow gave this book a 10/10, must read, best fantasy book ever, completely life changing, you will never be the same after reading this book, type reviews…
Well, I thought the book was terrible. 😞 Again, so sorry to all involved. It felt poorly written in a weird choppy way that was so hard to follow. I can only describe it as feeling like I was reading spotty cell phone service if that was a thing. The world building was intense to say the least (please see the 20 page glossary before the book even starts) and this coming from a person who owns a t-shirt that says, “I survived the first 100 pages of Crescent City.” (Okay, I don’t really, but how great would that t-shirt be?!)
There was a weird like native ritualistic ‘Dances with Wolves’ fight scene mid book that not only came out of nowhere, it made zero sense, and did nothing to add to the story and didn’t feel like it even fit the vibe. I think dragons die and turn into moons and the sky has millions of moons, but some fall from the sky. But the MFC has amnesia and then we get a few Jekyll/Hyde moments…I think? What? I’m so confused about everything that happens in this book. I felt like I was the one with amnesia since nothing makes sense or flows or feels like it has any rhyme or reason. Maybe things will come together in the sequel, but I honestly don’t really care enough about these characters to find out, and I swear I am the easiest reader to please…ever.
The only reason I gave it 2 stars was it had a like a 15 page spice scene and that was actually really well done and the MMC’s nickname for the FMC is “Moonbeam” and I thought that was really cute.
This book is extremely overhyped in my opinion and I will die on this hill. Which Sarah would probably love for me to do if she (hopefully never) reads this review.


Also, this world has been hard to get into. It picked up a little, but I'm back to struggling some again.



I felt the same way. I ended up giving it 3 stars, but don't really remember why I opted for that over a 2 which is where I really thought I was going.




once I got into it it paces along quite nicely, I was surprised it could be a little dark and disturbing in places thou,
I enjoyed the twists and turns, but a little put out at times by the MFC as she was a little annoying at times.
I must admit I got to the end and felt I read a book with a storyline I didn't know where it's meant to go next, but I'm glutton for punishment because I've just pre- ordered book 2 because I have to know what it's all about.





Absolutely - l have had this book for months and can't get past the first chapter to be honest, its not gripping me at all.
Is this worth hanging in - and if so how far in before it starts to get good!? I almost never struggle to get into a book, so this is unusual for me!


I felt like not much happens and 1/3 can be cut without missing anything. This is not to say that its not important to read...but the plot is just very linear until the very end. Great writing though and Im excited to see where she takes the story.





What did people think of it?
Are the narrators enjoyable to listen to or ear splitting?
I do find that often when books have a lot of world building or dual POV this is often easier for me to get my head around it all by enjoying a book this way.

There was some deep world building and some blush worthy spice scenes. I agree with prior readers reviews of how this seemed almost like a prequel, like you already knew the world, characters, magical system and creatures.
Personally I liked the multi POV and felt like there could have been more given the length of the book. The character building was a bit lacking for me until over half way through.
Overall I enjoyed it and would recommend it if you’re looking for a fantasy world to dive into. Will I read the next book? Yes, hoping there will be more spice scenes and character development. Will I be preordering it and counting down the days till it releases? I don’t think so.

What did people think of it?
Are the narrators enjoyable to listen to or ear splitting?
I do find that often when books have a lot of worl..."
I listened to the audio for a good portion while reading along. I didn't mind it. It definitely helped with the pronunciation of some words because she has some weird ones in here lol