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Gary
Just bought Under the Amoral Bridge from Amazon. About 25% in, so far I quite like it. I'll write a full review when I'm done.
I'm 42% in now, I like it quite a bit. I think your world building is very good; I like the political edge to the atmosphere. The plot is strong. I like the way that your writing shows a bit of noir influence, it's sort of Chandler-esque cyberpunk. The only criticism I have is in the first couple chapters you tend to especially use a lot of ten dollar words that feel forced in; there are a lot of times where I feel like simpler language would have gotten the point across. Really, though, it's a minor quibble and probably just a personal thing. Really enjoying it so far.

Gary - your book is on my Wishlist.
Books mentioned in this topic
Running Black (other topics)The Know Circuit (other topics)
Under the Amoral Bridge (other topics)
Gary