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Writing Challenge > Rae's Dangerous Hero Captive/Kidnap Writing Challenge Story: On the Cut (Working Title)

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message 1: by CaliGirlRae (new)

CaliGirlRae (rae_l) | 279 comments Arch invited me on over and I thought I'd take a stab at the challenge. I started this story (possible novel?) called On the Cut (for now) but it keeps taking a back burner to other projects. So I thought this challenge would be a nice kick in the butt to get me going on it. :-)

I'll probably post it later today but I want to get caught up on my reading (books and other folks' stories) before I dive on in. Just thought I'd carve out a 'coming soon' space for it. I look forward to writing with all you lovely folks and checking out your stories!


message 2: by Arch (new)

Arch  | 4245 comments Mod
Rae, I'm glad that you are joining us. I can't wait to read your story.

Whenever you're ready to share your story, do so.


message 3: by Danielle The Book Huntress , Loves 'Em Lethal (new)

 Danielle The Book Huntress  (gatadelafuente) | 9851 comments Mod
Yay! Rae is here. Can't wait to read about your dangerous hero. You do them so well!


message 4: by CaliGirlRae (new)

CaliGirlRae (rae_l) | 279 comments Thanks, Arch. :-) I van't wait to get started.

Danielle, I have to say that means a lot coming from you. You've written one of my fave bad boy heroes!


message 5: by CaliGirlRae (new)

CaliGirlRae (rae_l) | 279 comments Eek! That should be *can't. That'll teach me to type while on the elliptical lol.


message 6: by Arch (new)

Arch  | 4245 comments Mod
Danielle has the bad boy packed down.


message 7: by Arch (new)

Arch  | 4245 comments Mod
Rae wrote: "Eek! That should be *can't. That'll teach me to type while on the elliptical lol."

lol!


message 8: by Danielle The Book Huntress , Loves 'Em Lethal (new)

 Danielle The Book Huntress  (gatadelafuente) | 9851 comments Mod
Oh, that's so nice of you both to say. I really did need to start this group as a support system. I was starting to think I needed therapy because a good dangerous hero always gets my heart beating faster. :)


message 9: by Arch (last edited Mar 29, 2010 10:43AM) (new)

Arch  | 4245 comments Mod
Danielle "The Book Huntress" wrote: "Oh, that's so nice of you both to say. I really did need to start this group as a support system. I was starting to think I needed therapy because a good dangerous hero always gets my heart beating..."

I know the feeling. That's how Sam does to me. :)


message 10: by CaliGirlRae (new)

CaliGirlRae (rae_l) | 279 comments Le sigh. That's so true, Danielle. Hehe.


message 11: by Danielle The Book Huntress , Loves 'Em Lethal (new)

 Danielle The Book Huntress  (gatadelafuente) | 9851 comments Mod
Sam is very sighworthy. He's just awesome!


message 12: by Arch (new)

Arch  | 4245 comments Mod
Danielle "The Book Huntress" wrote: "Sam is very sighworthy. He's just awesome!"

That's my baby!


message 13: by CaliGirlRae (last edited Jun 03, 2023 07:14AM) (new)

CaliGirlRae (rae_l) | 279 comments Okay here's the first part of my story. A little bit of hero inspiration: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fmUeED...

http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_hpgX-yqoglg...


message 14: by CaliGirlRae (last edited Jun 03, 2023 07:14AM) (new)

CaliGirlRae (rae_l) | 279 comments (Chapt. 1 continued)


message 15: by Arch (new)

Arch  | 4245 comments Mod
Action pack! Rae, you go girl.

I like your hero's picture.

Tara is dodging bullets. Poor woman. She doesn't have to worry, the stranger will keep her safe. Thank goodness, he was there. She would have been dead.

I'm waiting patiently for more.


message 16: by CaliGirlRae (last edited Jun 03, 2023 07:14AM) (new)

CaliGirlRae (rae_l) | 279 comments Thanks Arch! I love me some Thomas K. and I realized I hadn't come across too many German bad boy heroes and he's the ultimate!

I got to finish the first chapter tonight. Will work on more probably tomorrow or so but I want to catch up on some reading here and in my TBR! :-)


message 17: by Danielle The Book Huntress , Loves 'Em Lethal (new)

 Danielle The Book Huntress  (gatadelafuente) | 9851 comments Mod
That was fantastic, Rae. I am sitting here drooling, imagining Thomas Kretschmann!


message 18: by Arch (new)

Arch  | 4245 comments Mod
Jurgen is a good bad boy. He'll keep Tara safe from the bad guys on the road.


message 19: by CaliGirlRae (new)

CaliGirlRae (rae_l) | 279 comments Lol met too, Danielle! I'm tempted to put on a Thomas K movie to help me write while I imagine, but I figure I'd go with Leon: The Professional for now. I love that movie.

Arch, yes he will. :-)


message 20: by Danielle The Book Huntress , Loves 'Em Lethal (new)

 Danielle The Book Huntress  (gatadelafuente) | 9851 comments Mod
I wish he was in more movies.


message 21: by CaliGirlRae (new)

CaliGirlRae (rae_l) | 279 comments Me too. He takes a lot of smallish, low key roles where he plays a villain or someone who's a bit sketchy. Which reminds me of another villain I was rooting for. He played a bad guy in Next and was still yum. Hehe.
I wish he would take on more lead guy actiony type of roles though.


message 22: by Danielle The Book Huntress , Loves 'Em Lethal (new)

 Danielle The Book Huntress  (gatadelafuente) | 9851 comments Mod
Yes, he just wasn't in Next or Wanted enough for me. :(


message 23: by Pamela(AllHoney), Danger Zone (new)

Pamela(AllHoney) (pamelap) | 1706 comments Mod
wow! that's all I can say :)


message 24: by CaliGirlRae (last edited Jun 03, 2023 07:13AM) (new)

CaliGirlRae (rae_l) | 279 comments Danielle, I know right! He's there and then gone the next moment. Boo.

Thanks Pamela!


message 25: by Arch (new)

Arch  | 4245 comments Mod
Jurgen (I remember a character from USA La Femme Nikita named Jurgen) - anyway, he will take the gun away from Tara. The bad guys always do.

I'm waiting patiently for the next installment.


message 26: by CaliGirlRae (new)

CaliGirlRae (rae_l) | 279 comments Really? How interesting. :-) I'll have to revisit that series. Haven't seen it in a long time but I do love the movie.

Yup yup. Unfortunately, she won't even have time to blink. :-)


message 27: by Arch (new)

Arch  | 4245 comments Mod
Yes, Michael didn't like Jurgen, especially, because Nikita liked Jurgen.

Tara is going to be mad, when Jurgen takes her gun out of her hand.


message 28: by CaliGirlRae (last edited Jun 03, 2023 07:21AM) (new)

CaliGirlRae (rae_l) | 279 comments Ooh tres interesting. Mmm. Michael. Yes, I need to hunt down that series for my Roy Dupuis fix.


message 29: by CaliGirlRae (last edited Jun 03, 2023 07:22AM) (new)

CaliGirlRae (rae_l) | 279 comments * * *


message 30: by CaliGirlRae (last edited Jun 03, 2023 07:22AM) (new)

CaliGirlRae (rae_l) | 279 comments ***


message 31: by CaliGirlRae (new)

CaliGirlRae (rae_l) | 279 comments (Dashing off to sleepy time now. Hope everyone has a good day out there). :-)


message 32: by Danielle The Book Huntress , Loves 'Em Lethal (new)

 Danielle The Book Huntress  (gatadelafuente) | 9851 comments Mod
That was awesome, Rae. I am so loving your story!


message 33: by Pamela(AllHoney), Danger Zone (new)

Pamela(AllHoney) (pamelap) | 1706 comments Mod
hmmm, goodnight and come back soon! I want more!


message 34: by Arch (new)

Arch  | 4245 comments Mod
Rae wrote: "Ooh tres interesting. Mmm. Michael. Yes, I need to hunt down that series for my Roy Dupuis fix.

Here's more story:

It took every ounce of willpower within her to keep the gun steady. Her heart ..."


What's up with the bad boys letting the heroine know he wouldn't mind being connected to her, when she ask him what she has that he wants.

Those bad boys!

So, Jurgen was hired to kill Tara. Wow! That's news no heroine would want to hear.

He's a good guy though. He saved her from the bad guys.

I'm moving to the next installment. :)


message 35: by Arch (new)

Arch  | 4245 comments Mod
Rae wrote: "(Dashing off to sleepy time now. Hope everyone has a good day out there). :-)"

You've stayed up all this time?

I know how writing can take over sleep.

I've stayed up to write my last installment and gotten a few hours of rest for work.


message 36: by CaliGirlRae (new)

CaliGirlRae (rae_l) | 279 comments Yeah I have wonky night owl hours. :-/ I don't know what it is but it's been like that since I was a baby lol. The night is so peaceful, especially when you're in the writing groove and it just keeps going like with you, Arch. :-)


message 37: by CaliGirlRae (new)

CaliGirlRae (rae_l) | 279 comments Arch wrote: "What's up with the bad boys letting the heroine know he wouldn't mind being connected to her, when she ask him what she has that he wants.

Those bad boys!

So, Jurgen was hired to kill Tara. Wow! That's news no heroine would want to hear.

He's a good guy though. He saved her from the bad guys.

I'm moving to the next installment. :) "



Yeah, they need to keep their mind on the job but they're always looking at the extra incentives. Lol


message 38: by Arch (new)

Arch  | 4245 comments Mod
Rae wrote: "Yeah I have wonky night owl hours. :-/ I don't know what it is but it's been like that since I was a baby lol. The night is so peaceful, especially when you're in the writing groove and it just kee..."

Well, I plan to finish writing at least by 11 p.m. tonight.


message 39: by CaliGirlRae (new)

CaliGirlRae (rae_l) | 279 comments I look forward to reading it, Arch. :-)


message 40: by Arch (new)

Arch  | 4245 comments Mod
Rae wrote: "I look forward to reading it, Arch. :-)"

How far did you get?


message 41: by CaliGirlRae (new)

CaliGirlRae (rae_l) | 279 comments I got up until the part where she was caught but the rest is in my head. It's just a matter of putting it on the page but I got caught up in catching the current ebook news so writing took a back seat. Ack. I didn't want to write the next part yesterday cause I was nearly falling out of my chair LOL. And I wanted to have a clear head because it's a bit of a biggie hehe.


message 42: by Arch (new)

Arch  | 4245 comments Mod
Rae wrote: "I got up until the part where she was caught but the rest is in my head. It's just a matter of putting it on the page but I got caught up in catching the current ebook news so writing took a back s..."

Sorry.

I was talking about my story.

I have to finish reading your latest installments. I'll will do that later on.


message 43: by CaliGirlRae (last edited Mar 31, 2010 06:12PM) (new)

CaliGirlRae (rae_l) | 279 comments Edit note: Yorgi should be Georgi although it's pronounced the same way. I'm going to change that real quick. I had to check a Bond villain character from the Living Daylights with the same name and noticed it was spelled wrong.

Speaking of The Living Daylights:





Yes, please may I have some more!


message 44: by CaliGirlRae (last edited Mar 31, 2010 05:50PM) (new)

CaliGirlRae (rae_l) | 279 comments Arch wrote: "Rae wrote: "I got up until the part where she was caught but the rest is in my head. It's just a matter of putting it on the page but I got caught up in catching the current ebook news so writing t..."

Oh! Hehe. Nevermind then. :-)

Hope you enjoy!


message 45: by Arch (new)

Arch  | 4245 comments Mod
Rae wrote: "Edit note: Yorgi should be Georgi although it's pronounced the same way. I'm going to change that real quick. I had to check a Bond villain character from the Living Daylights with the same name an..."

Is this Jurgen?


message 46: by Arch (new)

Arch  | 4245 comments Mod
Rae wrote: "Oh! Hehe. Nevermind then. :-)

Hope you enjoy!"


lol, I will.


message 47: by CaliGirlRae (new)

CaliGirlRae (rae_l) | 279 comments Arch wrote: "Is this Jurgen? "

Oh, no. Hehe. I just had a craving for a bad boy Bond hench-villain.


This is my inspiration for Jurgen.


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message 48: by Arch (new)

Arch  | 4245 comments Mod
That's the man from earlier, right?


message 49: by Pamela(AllHoney), Danger Zone (new)

Pamela(AllHoney) (pamelap) | 1706 comments Mod
nice Jurgen :)


message 50: by CaliGirlRae (last edited Mar 31, 2010 07:04PM) (new)

CaliGirlRae (rae_l) | 279 comments Ya that's him. :-)

Thanks, Pamela! I wish we can enter him into the cloning program. I think it's only fair to share the wealth. Lol.


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