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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

Okay, so let's start brainstorming.


message 2: by Nate (new)

Nate Ok but I'll warn you its prob not going to be much of a storm LOL


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

Teehee. Okay, so, let's talk genre.

Since I assume romance is out of the question . . . why don't we try mystery or suspense.


message 4: by Nate (new)

Nate why not a bit of both?


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

Sounds good to me.

Which would you rather do first: Plot or Characters?

I'm sorta feelin' a Clue rip-off or something like that.


message 6: by Nate (new)

Nate plot lets figure out the plot first than work on caraters


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

Okay...

I kind of like the idea of setting it in the past...say late 1800's. Maybe a little Holmes kind of vibe?


message 8: by Nate (new)

Nate Ok ...the mystery. Solve Jack the ripper type cases.or maybe someone is killing the orpans who are tunrded out on the streets


message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

Ooh, I like that. Dark, edgy, room for some really creepy scenes.

Hm...who will be our Sherlock Holmes and who will be Jack the Ripper?


message 10: by Nate (new)

Nate LMAO Y do I get to be Jack the ripper (who should have a dif nam btw) Maybe Im like watson was to sherlock.


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

Haha. You can be whoever you want. I don't have a preference. Although, you'd probably make a much more convincing villain than I would.


message 12: by Nate (new)

Nate LOL well maybe the villian is the mystery..Thats who we're looking for. Could it be the baker, the villiage idiot whos not such an idiot ..or mabe its the undertaker.


message 13: by [deleted user] (new)

Ah, intriguing. I like it. Or, it could be the sweet 4'10" girl who works at the bookstore and never says a bad thing about anyone.


message 14: by Nate (new)

Nate There goes that diney facade' LOL


message 15: by Nate (new)

Nate Ok so here's my idea I porpose that there is some creeper going around killing ppl & tageting orphans. Put the two main charaters an't seem to narrow down who the colpret (sp?) is ....


message 16: by [deleted user] (new)

Propose. Culprit. Targeting. Characters. Can't. Okay, sorry. I'll stop. ;)

I like that idea. It's gritty. Okay, so are we doing a Holmes/Watson thing? If so, I call dibs on Holmes.


message 17: by [deleted user] (new)

This looks really good.You guys are great. :)


message 18: by Nate (new)

Nate Alright LOOK we're NAWT going to start on my gramar and spelling and typos!! ave that for the editing. Gramar Natzi!! lol


message 19: by [deleted user] (new)

Hey, you asked, dude. Maybe you didn't ask for corrections on every word, but you had to know you were opening up a can of worms.

@ Asiyah: Hello :).


message 20: by [deleted user] (new)

*rolls eyes*


message 21: by [deleted user] (new)

Ooh, I propose that we write in accents.


message 22: by Nate (new)

Nate Asiyah.M -Turning a new leaf- wrote: "This looks really good.You guys are great. :)"

Thanks. Mawhahahahaa


message 23: by [deleted user] (new)

Careful, Asiyah. It takes a lot to keep this one's ego in check.


message 24: by [deleted user] (new)

Candace (Amare Infinitum) wrote: "Ooh, I propose that we write in accents."

Yes! Hey am I doing this with you or just watching?


message 25: by Nate (new)

Nate LoL that should be interesting. awight I'll give it a go.


message 26: by Nate (new)

Nate Asiyah.M -Turning a new leaf- wrote: "Candace (Amare Infinitum) wrote: "Ooh, I propose that we write in accents."

Yes! Hey am I doing this with you or just watching?"


LMAO sorry My mind went o the gutter fo r a second there...
Your here You participate, with the writing and ideas and what have you LOL


message 27: by [deleted user] (new)

Exactly. You're part of the team.

And, Nate? Really? Really?


message 28: by [deleted user] (new)

Lmfao.So what do you guys have so far?


message 29: by Nate (new)

Nate Ok so whats the name of our 2 detective type charater Oh are they detectives or towns people fed up with the lack of help from the Bobbie's eh?


message 30: by Nate (last edited Nov 13, 2010 04:46PM) (new)

Nate She might as well know what she's getting into. LOL Mawhahaha


message 31: by [deleted user] (new)

Basically, here's our plot. It's the late 1800's. A Jack the Ripper type murderer is attacking orphans. A Holmes/Watson team are investigating.

@ Nate: Ooh, um...give me a sec. I'll have an awesome name.


This is set in London, yes?


message 32: by Nate (new)

Nate Ok that's scary. I just know you are thriving to pick some lame ass name arnt you?


message 33: by [deleted user] (new)

:(


message 34: by [deleted user] (new)

London is so over done though.
Nathan?I like that name.


message 35: by [deleted user] (new)

Detective Duncan Murtagh and his esteemed partner Callum Acheson.


message 36: by Nate (new)

Nate oh asiyah are u offended by cursing cus I'll bleep it out if you are. I dont mind


message 37: by Nate (new)

Nate I'M Callum!!


message 38: by Nate (new)

Nate but Callum Archerson


message 39: by [deleted user] (new)

I don't mind when people cuss.Only if you do it every sentence then that's not cool.


message 40: by [deleted user] (new)

Candace (Amare Infinitum) wrote: "Detective Duncan Murtagh and his esteemed partner Callum Acheson."

......*bursts out laughing*
Nice names.


message 41: by [deleted user] (new)

Fine, Nate. I get to be Duncan.

Asiyah, do you want to be Constable Nathan [Uh, you can pick his last name]?


message 42: by Nate (new)

Nate I dont think Im that bad and I dont usually use the F bomb


message 43: by [deleted user] (new)

*faceplam* I need a last name.Anybody have a suggestion?


message 44: by [deleted user] (new)

Okay, so Detective Duncan Murtagh and his esteemed colleague Callum Archerson are working with Constable Nathan [Last Name To Be Determined] in an effort to find and thwart the evil plans of the new villain.


@ Nate: Did you notice I used a vocab word?


message 45: by Nate (new)

Nate Bigsby lol


message 46: by [deleted user] (new)

Nathan Donoghue
Nathan Blackwood
Nathan Darrow
Nathan Devereaux


message 47: by Nate (new)

Nate Show Off


message 48: by Nate (new)

Nate Off topic but I hate when ppl assume my name is Nathan indtead of Nathaniel


message 49: by [deleted user] (new)

I'm sure you do. I prefer Nathaniel, by the way.


message 50: by [deleted user] (new)

Nathan Devereaux.Love it. :)


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