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message 1: by T.O.L.I., ~the ruler, and dictator......not really~ (last edited Oct 30, 2008 01:51PM) (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 410 comments Mod
so what is your most recent story about?


message 2: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ uhhh ... most recent completed story? story we just worked on?


message 3: by Dylan (new)

Dylan (dmfriend26) | 4 comments Well, the one I'm writting now is about this boy whose parents fight constantly. He prays to God that he'd die. Then he starts to dream of a strange man. He says he can give him eternal life. Once he becomes a vampire he learns his old life was much better than being a vampire.




message 4: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ i'm not really working on much at the moment. i'm sorta working on this retelling of little red riding hood.

tomorrow night i'm starting my nanowrimo novel, which i have big plans for! ;D it's about this society where everyone starts getting this injection that erases all of their impure thoughts ... and these teens rebelling against it. yeah, it's a little cliché. but it will be cool. XD


Xerxes Break(Vivian Ephona) (ephona) The one I'm into right now is my fan fiction Heart of Galaxia. Basically it's about a girl who is trying to reclaim a sacred sword from the thief who stole it from her mother on her deathbed. Thing is the thief claims it to be meant for him. It's a fan fiction for the Kirby anime.


message 6: by Veronica (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) GAAAHHHH! I am writing the final two chapters tonight of Roses for June!!!!! I have a good chunk of chapter 13 already writen; I wrote it a few days ago because I had to get the scene out of my head.

Anyhow, I am just doing a few things on goodreads and the writing!!!


message 7: by T.O.L.I., ~the ruler, and dictator......not really~ (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 410 comments Mod
brgid and ephona...sounds cool


message 8: by Leiko (new)

Leiko Xantara (arrogant_protector) Okay... this is very confusing. It's called Weryt

So you meet Lye and Lera. Lera is coolheaded, while Lye is an idiot. Then they meet Angel. Angel is part of a clan called the Hayns clan. The hayns clan can make Angel like wings appear on his back (thus his name...it's really Angeiko) and a golden light sword appear. The Hayns clan was supposebly all killed over 50 years ago. Now only a few are left. Oh, yeah, Lera and Angel have crushes on each other. Anyway, they are all against the tayogs. (evil creatures who take over the world and killed the Hayns) To stop them they must find the mysterios Weryt plant. Lera is killed by the blood ninja. (more on that later)
Next comes Doc, a doctor who is clumsy, scared of everything, and ironicly a pacifist. He joins them, then comes Sword, a tayog who is kind and nice. Then comes Drea, who is really the blood ninja. (a mass murderer/assasion/ thief) Who technicaly never killed someone. (there are a lot of imposters)
Next, there is Troy, a half cat/ half dog/ half bear thingy. (there is a correct name just haven't made it up)

That's the end of book one and it takes forever! So what do you think? (I'm about at Drea coming in)




message 9: by Leiko (new)

Leiko Xantara (arrogant_protector) Oh yeah I meant to put this but couldn't find where. All your stories are really cool. Are they on goodreads?


message 10: by T.O.L.I., ~the ruler, and dictator......not really~ (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 410 comments Mod
me? yea mine are all on goodreads


message 11: by Quinn (last edited Nov 09, 2008 10:58PM) (new)

Quinn | 1 comments my most recent welll after i wrote dis story about a lab rat that heard voices in his head (its really a story agenst animal testing) im starting this epic story based on this kinda creator that creats all the earth and well everything inclooding the sun he loves the sun so much he makes three women to take care of his beloved inatamit sun. and the story is based on the sufring of da three ladys. relly the creator is evil and inficts much suffering on the three. this ends in the death of da youngest worker wich ends of the end of the world cuz the others are so afected by de death they can no longer care for the sun. the world depends on da sun so the sun goes out the world dies u like??



message 12: by Veronica (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) That sounds really intersting. My stories don't have any special hidden meanings or anything in them.


message 13: by Madeline (new)

Madeline i just got a funny idea. the idea isnt as funny as how i got it but whatever, not the point.
in school i was drawing stick people killing each other and getting haunted and all this other wacky stuff and i thought it would be cool to write about like a mofia(i know i probably spelled that wrong) sorta thing. so that is my distraction story


haha my staick people. still makes me laugh


message 14: by Riley (new)

Riley (booksarecool) Well I'm making a story, and I'm a little worried about what to do without making it sound like Twilight.

Basically it can be explained through my prologue:
He leaned down to kiss me, and instead of running away, I leaned in. What was wrong with me?! Here was a monster, standing right in front of me, and I was leaning in for a kiss!
"No." I whispered, but even as I said it I leaned ever closer.
Suddenly Zeno quickly closed the distance, squashing my lips against his in an almost violent way. It was violent. I felt a tear squeeze through my eyelids, sliding down my cheek. I was kissing the monster, no the demon, that killed my family. I remembered my parents dead eyes and jerked away. I slapped his cheek, and though it made a loud sound I knew it didn't hurt him.
"Jayd." He said quietly, but I could hear the pleading tone in his voice.
"No!" I shouted again, running off. I wrapped my arms around my ribcage. I sprinted as far and fast as I could, yet in an instant he was right next to me.
"I...I can't..." I said, my tone pleading, sobbing, crying.
The tears slid down my cheek on to the ground floor. I looked up at his face, and saw the hunger battling with his morals.
"Yes you can Jayd. You can do anything." I slapped him again, giving into the part of me that wanted to fight.
I punched him, pummeling every part of his body that I could. He just stood still, allowing himself to be a punching bag.
Then I gave into the part of me that loved him and kissed him. I couldn't stop after I started. I kissed him like I had punched him, with every fiber of my being.
And then he was gone. As quickly as he had come.
"Zeno...?" I said into the winter air.
"No. Dan." the harsh voice sounded from among the trees.
"Dan!" I said, sighing in relief.
He appeared out of nowhere, almost like Zeno did, only I could feel that he was good. Not bad, like Zeno.
I could tell he was angry. The rage unfurled from his eyes, his body language was tense, I knew that he was going to lose it.
"Dan?" I said tentatively.
He hunched his shoulders and his hands curled into fists.
"You're in love with...with that monster?" he asked, his teeth bared.
"Do you think I wanted to fall in love with him Dan? Do you think I can control my emotions? He killed my f****** family Dan! I don't want to love him!" I said, growing angry.
"Yet you didn't want to love me either." He said, his body shaking with anger.
I looked at the earth floor. When I looked back up, Dan was gone.
Here I was, abandoned, yet again. I folded into myself and began crying.
I don't know how long I spent just feeling sorry for myself, but eventually I stood up and walked down the trail toward home.


message 15: by Veronica (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) Nope. Nothing like Twilight. Not at all.


message 16: by Leiko (new)

Leiko Xantara (arrogant_protector) Nothing. And I should know since I criticize anything twilight... Anyway that is really good! Is it on goodreads?


message 17: by T.O.L.I., ~the ruler, and dictator......not really~ (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 410 comments Mod
OH OH OH!!!!!!
YAYZ!!!!!

ok so it goes like this-
first eveything on earth that is non-living freezes in space, wherever they are, even if they were in mid-air they freezed.

then all the animals froze

then everyone below thirteen

then everyone above sixty

then it just happened person by person. Frozen forever


message 18: by Leiko (new)

Leiko Xantara (arrogant_protector) Wow. How does it end and who is the main chararcter?


message 19: by Madeline (last edited Dec 14, 2008 02:17PM) (new)

Madeline i just had the most genius idea EVEERRRRRRR!!!!!!


Are you ready???


ok here it is

Every story i write will be about a girl reborn in a different time with no memory about past lives or anything. Each girl will have a characteristic of the past girls. Each plot will be different with one or two similarities to the last plot. Some other characters will do the same as the main girl who keeps coming back. Plus there will be weird occurances that can't be explained but will be in the next book.


pure genius.


oh yea


message 20: by [deleted user] (new)

I've heard something like that before . . .


message 21: by T.O.L.I., ~the ruler, and dictator......not really~ (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 410 comments Mod
aewsomeful


message 22: by [deleted user] (new)

well my latest was this one i'm calling My Little Slice of Heaven

Katie hates her life, failing tests, yelling parents, crappy friends. Then she hears about the door. At first she thinks its just a place where highschoolers go to get drunk and loose their problems...But that's what shew needed. SO she went. And followed the rest of them through the Door. And she dissapeered.
On the other side, is a paridise, but Katie still feels alone. She stays there, on the paradis side of the Door for one night, an d sits watching the people who have wings (more later) The next day she finds that the door won't open for her. And she needs to find her way out, and fast...


message 23: by [deleted user] (new)

I JUST GOT A NEW PLOT LAST NIGHT!!! But, i'm not going to give the whole thing away, just what it's about . . .
W.R.K.R.
The Warner
The Rescuer
The Killer
The Resurrecter


message 24: by [deleted user] (new)

oh awesome! It sounds interesting


message 25: by [deleted user] (new)

i knows, i'm excited!


message 26: by [deleted user] (new)

Yeah! I love that feeling i get before i start a book, and after i finish it!


message 27: by T.O.L.I., ~the ruler, and dictator......not really~ (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 410 comments Mod
O.o cali....cool!


message 28: by [deleted user] (new)

i knoww. . . i need to write it. I'll probably start this weekend.


message 29: by [deleted user] (new)

coolio!


message 30: by [deleted user] (new)

good how r u?


message 31: by [deleted user] (new)

lucky you. I've got tests and all that, but no finals quite yet.


message 32: by [deleted user] (new)

lucky you. College is a long ways away. Lucky me!


message 33: by [deleted user] (new)

Have fun, and enjoy the break then!


message 34: by [deleted user] (new)

mine, hasn't even started. I'm a bit crowded with stories. I still need to get Lynella and Mark to talk to eachother . . . and post the new chapter that I wrote 1 month ago . . .


message 35: by [deleted user] (new)

lol, hey do u think you could write that long review over again? I'm not saying u have 2, but maybe you could tell a bit of what you thought.


message 36: by [deleted user] (new)

Black Shadows.


message 37: by [deleted user] (new)

that's fine. it helps!


message 38: by T.O.L.I., ~the ruler, and dictator......not really~ (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 410 comments Mod
I HAVE A SNOW DAY!!!!!!!


message 39: by Veronica (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) So do I!!! I think pretty much everybody is SE michigan does, actually. :D


message 40: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie I DO TOO!!! Yay, well, not really 'cause today was the last day before break, and I was supposed to spend the entire time watching movies, and building gingerbread houses!


message 41: by T.O.L.I., ~the ruler, and dictator......not really~ (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 410 comments Mod
lol


message 42: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie I know. Now I'm sad. :(

BUT THERE'S ONLY FIVE MORE DAYS UNTIL CHRISTMAS EVE!!

So I'm happy 'bout that. =D


message 43: by *JayJay* (new)

*JayJay* i get 2 open presents on sunday cuz thts wen my bro gets 2 cum ovr! yea! but thn finals are monday & tuesday cuz we didnt hv skool 2day cuz of the snow. ugh! extra study time tho...depending how u look @ it...


message 44: by *JayJay* (new)

*JayJay* huh


message 45: by T.O.L.I., ~the ruler, and dictator......not really~ (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 410 comments Mod
O.o creepy


message 46: by *JayJay* (new)

*JayJay* just a lil


message 47: by T.O.L.I., ~the ruler, and dictator......not really~ (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 410 comments Mod
lol


message 48: by Chandani (new)

Chandani  (milkduds920) Hi guysss!

So the plot for my story is about a girl whos father is the head of a big company, which is actually just a front for the worlds leading supplier for biowarfare, lasers and scientific combat. He sent his daughter (MC) to a specialized school training government agents, but shen she was there she found out that her father was conducting experiments with human guenie pigs. She then rens away from the school and tries to take take down her father!!! Yay!


message 49: by T.O.L.I., ~the ruler, and dictator......not really~ (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 410 comments Mod
cool!


message 50: by Madeline (new)

Madeline she shuld like start an army to take down her dad!!


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