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tomorrow night i'm starting my nanowrimo novel, which i have big plans for! ;D it's about this society where everyone starts getting this injection that erases all of their impure thoughts ... and these teens rebelling against it. yeah, it's a little cliché. but it will be cool. XD


Anyhow, I am just doing a few things on goodreads and the writing!!!

So you meet Lye and Lera. Lera is coolheaded, while Lye is an idiot. Then they meet Angel. Angel is part of a clan called the Hayns clan. The hayns clan can make Angel like wings appear on his back (thus his name...it's really Angeiko) and a golden light sword appear. The Hayns clan was supposebly all killed over 50 years ago. Now only a few are left. Oh, yeah, Lera and Angel have crushes on each other. Anyway, they are all against the tayogs. (evil creatures who take over the world and killed the Hayns) To stop them they must find the mysterios Weryt plant. Lera is killed by the blood ninja. (more on that later)
Next comes Doc, a doctor who is clumsy, scared of everything, and ironicly a pacifist. He joins them, then comes Sword, a tayog who is kind and nice. Then comes Drea, who is really the blood ninja. (a mass murderer/assasion/ thief) Who technicaly never killed someone. (there are a lot of imposters)
Next, there is Troy, a half cat/ half dog/ half bear thingy. (there is a correct name just haven't made it up)
That's the end of book one and it takes forever! So what do you think? (I'm about at Drea coming in)




in school i was drawing stick people killing each other and getting haunted and all this other wacky stuff and i thought it would be cool to write about like a mofia(i know i probably spelled that wrong) sorta thing. so that is my distraction story
haha my staick people. still makes me laugh

Basically it can be explained through my prologue:
He leaned down to kiss me, and instead of running away, I leaned in. What was wrong with me?! Here was a monster, standing right in front of me, and I was leaning in for a kiss!
"No." I whispered, but even as I said it I leaned ever closer.
Suddenly Zeno quickly closed the distance, squashing my lips against his in an almost violent way. It was violent. I felt a tear squeeze through my eyelids, sliding down my cheek. I was kissing the monster, no the demon, that killed my family. I remembered my parents dead eyes and jerked away. I slapped his cheek, and though it made a loud sound I knew it didn't hurt him.
"Jayd." He said quietly, but I could hear the pleading tone in his voice.
"No!" I shouted again, running off. I wrapped my arms around my ribcage. I sprinted as far and fast as I could, yet in an instant he was right next to me.
"I...I can't..." I said, my tone pleading, sobbing, crying.
The tears slid down my cheek on to the ground floor. I looked up at his face, and saw the hunger battling with his morals.
"Yes you can Jayd. You can do anything." I slapped him again, giving into the part of me that wanted to fight.
I punched him, pummeling every part of his body that I could. He just stood still, allowing himself to be a punching bag.
Then I gave into the part of me that loved him and kissed him. I couldn't stop after I started. I kissed him like I had punched him, with every fiber of my being.
And then he was gone. As quickly as he had come.
"Zeno...?" I said into the winter air.
"No. Dan." the harsh voice sounded from among the trees.
"Dan!" I said, sighing in relief.
He appeared out of nowhere, almost like Zeno did, only I could feel that he was good. Not bad, like Zeno.
I could tell he was angry. The rage unfurled from his eyes, his body language was tense, I knew that he was going to lose it.
"Dan?" I said tentatively.
He hunched his shoulders and his hands curled into fists.
"You're in love with...with that monster?" he asked, his teeth bared.
"Do you think I wanted to fall in love with him Dan? Do you think I can control my emotions? He killed my f****** family Dan! I don't want to love him!" I said, growing angry.
"Yet you didn't want to love me either." He said, his body shaking with anger.
I looked at the earth floor. When I looked back up, Dan was gone.
Here I was, abandoned, yet again. I folded into myself and began crying.
I don't know how long I spent just feeling sorry for myself, but eventually I stood up and walked down the trail toward home.

OH OH OH!!!!!!
YAYZ!!!!!
ok so it goes like this-
first eveything on earth that is non-living freezes in space, wherever they are, even if they were in mid-air they freezed.
then all the animals froze
then everyone below thirteen
then everyone above sixty
then it just happened person by person. Frozen forever
YAYZ!!!!!
ok so it goes like this-
first eveything on earth that is non-living freezes in space, wherever they are, even if they were in mid-air they freezed.
then all the animals froze
then everyone below thirteen
then everyone above sixty
then it just happened person by person. Frozen forever

Are you ready???
ok here it is
Every story i write will be about a girl reborn in a different time with no memory about past lives or anything. Each girl will have a characteristic of the past girls. Each plot will be different with one or two similarities to the last plot. Some other characters will do the same as the main girl who keeps coming back. Plus there will be weird occurances that can't be explained but will be in the next book.
pure genius.
oh yea
I've heard something like that before . . .
well my latest was this one i'm calling My Little Slice of Heaven
Katie hates her life, failing tests, yelling parents, crappy friends. Then she hears about the door. At first she thinks its just a place where highschoolers go to get drunk and loose their problems...But that's what shew needed. SO she went. And followed the rest of them through the Door. And she dissapeered.
On the other side, is a paridise, but Katie still feels alone. She stays there, on the paradis side of the Door for one night, an d sits watching the people who have wings (more later) The next day she finds that the door won't open for her. And she needs to find her way out, and fast...
Katie hates her life, failing tests, yelling parents, crappy friends. Then she hears about the door. At first she thinks its just a place where highschoolers go to get drunk and loose their problems...But that's what shew needed. SO she went. And followed the rest of them through the Door. And she dissapeered.
On the other side, is a paridise, but Katie still feels alone. She stays there, on the paradis side of the Door for one night, an d sits watching the people who have wings (more later) The next day she finds that the door won't open for her. And she needs to find her way out, and fast...
I JUST GOT A NEW PLOT LAST NIGHT!!! But, i'm not going to give the whole thing away, just what it's about . . .
W.R.K.R.
The Warner
The Rescuer
The Killer
The Resurrecter
W.R.K.R.
The Warner
The Rescuer
The Killer
The Resurrecter
oh awesome! It sounds interesting
Yeah! I love that feeling i get before i start a book, and after i finish it!
i knoww. . . i need to write it. I'll probably start this weekend.
lucky you. I've got tests and all that, but no finals quite yet.
lucky you. College is a long ways away. Lucky me!
Have fun, and enjoy the break then!
mine, hasn't even started. I'm a bit crowded with stories. I still need to get Lynella and Mark to talk to eachother . . . and post the new chapter that I wrote 1 month ago . . .
lol, hey do u think you could write that long review over again? I'm not saying u have 2, but maybe you could tell a bit of what you thought.


BUT THERE'S ONLY FIVE MORE DAYS UNTIL CHRISTMAS EVE!!
So I'm happy 'bout that. =D


So the plot for my story is about a girl whos father is the head of a big company, which is actually just a front for the worlds leading supplier for biowarfare, lasers and scientific combat. He sent his daughter (MC) to a specialized school training government agents, but shen she was there she found out that her father was conducting experiments with human guenie pigs. She then rens away from the school and tries to take take down her father!!! Yay!