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The library has it so I might check it out sometime.

My problem is that I bought the first two books in his other series


Corsair was awful, IMHO, and I couldn't get through it. The writing and storyline, erf. More like a really badly written YA. (Sorry Tim Severin if you ever see this).
I lent it to my father who reads and generally likes the same books as I and he managed to finish it, but wouldn't touch the second book with a ten foot pole because he disliked Corsair so much.
I also have someone in my friends list who tried the first Viking book a couple weeks back and couldn't get through it.
So, I am in a rock and a hard place. I was so turned off by Corsair that I keep putting off reading the first Viking book.

I have reviewed them on Goodreads (without spoilers), if you wanna go have a look.
They are, in short, a history of the Vikings, novelised.




There is definitely something to this.
I think an author has better luck if he is a storyteller first and a non fiction writer later.
People who wrote many non fiction and then try to crossover into fiction don't usually pull it off. In my experience.

I suspect I will suffer a similar fate with the first book, Ben.
I find it hard to believe that the writing I struck in his Corsair book that made me run away as fast as I could from his fiction, could be totally different in the Viking series.


Only 30 pages in. I like the writing better than his Corsair series but there hasn't been much dialogue yet and it is Severin's dialogue that I have issues with. The one section of dialogue in 30 pages had glimmers of what I didn't like in his Corsair series, modern and not terrific. Early days however...

I can see why many people cannot get into these Viking books of Severin's.
There is a distinct absence of any dialogue of value. There is a narrator. The main character. Who is old and talking about his life.
It feels more like he is telling a Saga. There is little character interaction, little dialogue. There is also, heavy detail, page after page, and I feel I only about know the world these Northmen are living in and not actually who these Northmen are.
If only Severin could include more character development, especially through dialogue, this might be a very good book.

I can see why many people cannot get into these Viking books of Severin's.
There is a distinct absence of any dialogue of value. There is a narrator. The main ch..."
I tried the first one in this series a few years back and couldn't get into it, can't remember why. I do remember being disappointed though as I had loved reading many of his travel/adventure books.



I wish authors would stick to truth and not include the unrealistic into historical fiction.


It is written well, mind. He seems to write excessive description with some skill. I have no idea what his dialogue and character interaction is like though. I am yet to meet it.

It won't be 4 or 5 star, likely a 3, but I was expecting to give it 1 or 2, so, strike me pink! How did that happen!

For anyone who does not like fantasy in their historical fiction, be aware that this one by Severin does sound like it could be fantasy. It is really hard to tell form the blurb if the 'dreams' and 'prophesy' can be explained rationally, so be aware.

There are a lot of historical fantasy out there that masquerade as straight hf. There is nothing wrong with historical fantasy. But so many people, including me, like their hist fic to be rational. If it has anything fantasy like, such as dreams, it needs to be explainable to make it hist fic instead of hist fan.
When I find one that I am not sure about, I generally just let people know that I am not sure. :-)












I've really liked Odinn's child and am now reading the 2nd in the series







Has any one read this, I picked it up today. Not many reviews on here about it."
I'm almost finished it, it's pretty good. There's some annoying fantasy elements and a few too many "lucky escapes" for the protagonist, but the writing style is easy to read.

I did not like the Viking trilogy he did, but was willing to try this new one....until I read about the fantasy. For my tastes, I find it a shame he did that.


Has any one read this, I picked it up today. Not many reviews on here about it."
I'm almost finished it, it's pretty good. There's some..."
thanks for that steve. its still on "I may read one day shelf"

I don't know why the editor didn't pick up on it - mine did. I originally had a kind of magical wise woman who appeared in similar fashion to my own protagonist, but my editor "suggested" the book would work much better without her. And she was right!
Tim's editor should have pointed out the same thing.
Other than that though, the way various people keep trying to kill the hero, but conveniently JUST miss him each time...it's wearing a bit thin that.
As I say though, I am enjoying the actual writing style, that's what's kept me going with it.





Loving pirates as much as I do, I made myself read his Corsair and sequels, but was far less impressed. I just found all the characters a bit two dimensional and dull.
Maybe I'll get around to his last Viking book some day, and his Saxon one too if I stumble across it.
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