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Like what? I enjoy discussing books and their relative merits and problems! I haven't finished Wonder yet, but when I do, I would love to see if my quibbles match up with yours.

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Toward the end of the book it is mentioned that Auggie ends up at the top of the class academically. This seemed to me to be a bit over the top as far as compensating for the fact that (if I recall correctly) Jack's mother said that he would bring the school standards down. It is entirely possible that Auggie would be at the top academically, but to me, it says that if he weren't, then he could still be seen as bringing the school standards down. He has to be excellent to be truly acceptable. I would like to have seen him do fine, but not stellarly, implying that it is OK for him to just be average. As I said, it is minor, it just bothered me a bit.
Another minor quibble: I thought Auggie's family was just a tad too good. Most of the other significant characters were much more nuanced and complex - and, for me, that added greatly to the strength of the book, but I felt that Auggie's family needed more dimensionality.
These minor quibbles aside, one of the more significant difficulties I have with the book is that I wish there had been more indication of how people SHOULD react to a child who is so obviously physically deformed. I hated it that he was always noticing the startled look that people had when they first saw him, but I KNOW I would react like that, too. How can you not? Perhaps for that reason, as well as others, I think the book would make a great read-aloud and discussion starter for upper elementary and even middle school aged students.


After an awful lot of processing, I've ultimately decided that it is a nice story that is incredibly idealistic. My daughter's experience is incredibly
mild compared to Auggie's, and she still gets treated badly by her peers (and a few of her teachers) even at nearly 19 years old.... and the only major difference at this point is that she wears a prosthetic eye and has severely limited vision which cause some quizzical expressions when she'strying to see something clearly. She has no scars or any other facial disfigurement. And she still gets treated like she has the plague.
After she was born, before her surgeries & her first prosthesis (which she got at 8 months old) I would be accosted by adult strangers in public places
with comments like "that child should be put in an institution" or "Shame on you for using drugs while you were pregnant" or "You should be reported" etc...
The world in our experience is not necessarily a kind place.
I know this is getting tons of Newbery Buzz, but I'm just not that impressed with it. I didn't think the writing was anything special. I do think it holds a great message to kids (and adults), and I wish I could be confident that it could make a real difference.




I agree. As soon as that scene started, I knew that Auggie was going to get the award. But honestly? I think Jack should have gotten it. Auggie went through a lot, yes, and he deserves a lot of credit for keeping going and not just dropping out of school. But he also didn't have much choice. He can't change what he looks like, and even if he had dropped out that wouldn't necessarily have made his life any easier. But Jack also went through a lot of hardship and strife and all of his unhappiness and bullying were based on the fact that he was friends with Auggie. He did have the choice to take the easier path and just give up the friendship, and he *chose* to be the better person. Anyway, I think I'm getting a little overwrought about a minor scene.


The book must be considered for its theme, presentation (clarity, accuracy and organization), plot, characters, setting, and style.
Setting is sort of eh. I felt like the book could have taken place in any city at any private school. Plot is similarly only okay. There were a couple of places where the author's hand seemed a little heavy or cliched (the moment the dog was introduced into the story as being cherished by Auggie, I knew that her days were numbered.) There were very few times when I wondered what was going to happen next. Nothing so big that I would consider them a deal breaker, but also nothing particularly stellar either.
Characters: This is where I thought the book really shone. Auggie was a complex person, both upset by references to his looks and making non-self-hatred jokes about them, by turns pouty and brave. His sister was also a complex character, one who loves her brother but also resents him in some ways, and enjoys the idea of being her own person and not just Auggie's sister.
I'm going to put the multiple character voices under my discussion of presentation. In some ways the many voices were a fabulous choice. Understanding what is going on with Via as well as with Auggie, and getting to see more than one side to the story had a major impact in our understanding of the characters and their worldviews. On the other hand, sometimes I questioned why those particular voices were heard from. I didn't feel like Justin added anything. He had no real insight into Auggie or Via beyond letting us see her from outside the family. As far as I can tell, he was telling the story only so that he could be the "hitman" that finally breaks the back of the War. You could take his entire section out and the book does not suffer. I'm not sure that Miranda's sections were vital either, though they lined up with the themes of the book of being kinder than necessary.
The theme was carried through the whole book, so that gets good marks.
But overall, my impression was one of a solidly good book that stands a chance in the running, but not one that is head and shoulders above the rest. It's one of the ones that I think we have to be careful to separate out whether we think the book is "good" or whether we think the book is "distinguished".

Also, I think kids look at this book in a different way. Whether that plays into Newbery or not, I'm not sure.

As an adult, I agree the book is WAY idealistic in its ending--and I hated the whole deal with Daisy the dog (although truly portrayed it was an unnecessary tear-jerker ploy). I think for young readers though it DOES offer both: (1) hope in the possiblity of the basic good in everyone; and (2) a good springboard for discussion about differences, tolerance, standing up for what is right in the face of opposition from the majority.
When I am reading children's literature I sometimes forget that I am adult and have had experiences in my life (usually unpleasant or disillusioning ones) that will not be present in the minds of most of the target-age readers for that particular book. It is sometimes helpful for me to go back and re-read a story as I consciously put aside those jaded realizations. I think Wonder might be such a book?
This book had--for me--what I look for when I read: a work of art that leaves me more than I was before I read it, whether that be a good laugh, a new thought or perspective or an inspiration to be a better or different person going forward. Others similar in the Wonder genre are Lord's Rules and Nora Baskins' Anything But Typical.

So how is this book going to be seen by those kids? Auggie is frequently described as freakish or monsterish, and yet he is able to turn an entire grade around in just 1 school year, by being himself. My daughter (whose genetics are factually 1 in a million) found the sugar-coated treatment of this issue laughable & mildly offensive. By age 10/11, her main issue was "Why me?", by 12/13 she was just plain furious with fate. Granted, Auggie's not entered the realm of puberty yet, nor does he have true physical impairments beyond his modified diet & corrected hearing loss (which I think would have been caught WAY before 5th grade... these kids go through a whole battery of medical testing at birth & constant evaluations from there on.
Obviously this book is trying to address the human nature behind this intolerance in social groups, and hopefully build some understanding & acceptance of differences, but I think this is not going to be as effective with individual reading. I'm glad some teachers will be guiding their students through it.
I agree that Jack is the character who grows the most and deserves the most credit here.
In our public library, we own 4 copies, with a moderate hold list since purchase. However, I've yet to have a child ask for it, check one out or return it. I think it's getting a circ from adults who are curious from all the buzz it's getting in the children's lit arena.
I would also pair this book up for discussion with Blume's "Blubber" or even Spinelli's "Stargirl" with real middle schoolers.

Thank you for your personal insight. They will help me as I guide my own children and future students through the book.



I liked this quote as well, along with the precepts at the beginning of every chapter. Our sixth grade book group read chose it last May, and I have to say, the discussion that resulted was terrific. It opened up topics that about bullying, fitting in, and kindness. All topics that middle school students struggle with. This is a book that will continue to be part of our curriculum because it does provide insight into these important issues. I think it is Newbery worthy, but also think it is likely to be a Schneider award winner.

I agree. The message is wonderful. But Newbery awards are generally not given only for the message (and thank goodness for that, or we'd have some horribly didactic and/or saccharine books!). Instead of talking about the message, I think it would be good to frame it in Newbery terms of theme. Clearly one of the major themes of the book is that kindness is about more than not being mean. Looked at from that perspective, how well does the book do at fulfilling that theme?
I think very well. Miranda's choice to give up her star role on opening night seemed sort of out of place and inconsequential to me when I was reading the book, even though it had a nice emotional resonance to it. But if I look at that chapter not as part of the plot but as part of the theme, it makes more sense. After starting high school Miranda is never mean to Via - but it is not until she makes a sacrifice, goes above and beyond, that we really see her be actually kind. (Whether or not you agree that she made the right choice, or whether it was realistic for her to do so, or whatever, the point is that it fits with the theme.)
We see something similar with Amos as well. He is not one of Auggie's tormentors, and, if I remember correctly, is one of the earlier neutrals in the War. Yet it is only when he comes to Auggie's rescue that he really becomes friendly with Auggie and Jack, ie, when we stops "not being mean" and does something more.

I generally don't think it's good writing when everything is tied up prettily with a bow - but this somehow worked for me. Not sure if it's in the running, but I'm glad I read it.
I agree with some other posts - not sure if this is a Newbery contender but it was a nice read. I liked how the book was in several voices, but would have liked a chapter in Julian's voice to see exactly where he and his family were "coming from". Especially since he was such a prominent figure in Auggie's life that year. Also agree that it was a bit too happy ending for it to be realistic for me as a school story, especially that age range.



Regarding Auggie's school performance: he was on the honor roll and was recognized, but he wasn't the "top" academic achiever. I personally was happy that the author allowed him to excel academically. He was previously homeschooled and many homeschooled students do very well when they return to a brick and mortar school. I felt it was realistic and I also thought that since he didn't care to put himself in public eye, that Auggie probably read a lot at home and explored topics more in depth than other kids. If he wasn't part of the honor roll, I would have been surprised since his difficulties weren't in mental capacity.
I also think that the lessor voices (Miranda, Justin) were there to remind readers that we all have challenges. . . some just aren't as visible.
I agree that Jack Will deserved the medal. It doesn't bother me though that Auggie got it. I like books with happy endings. The real quality of this book lies with the characters and the potential to use it as a springboard for discussion. I hope it at least gets recognized as an honor.
Amy



well, I actually love sad endings in movies and often don't like things wrapped up in pretty bows. So I'd have to disagree that's what we all do.
I would also argue that it is realistic fiction. The author has the freedom to take the plot where they please, but it may weaken it a bit.
Does an inspiring book make it distinguished? Are there parts that could be stronger - if so, how? all books have weaknesses - and I'll be interested to see how this stacks up to other strong contenders. As inspiring as it is :-) I really did like this book, but I'm still holding out hope to find something that makes me buy it and lend it to everyone I talk to. Hoping for one this year.
ps I wish I were a teacher and could see kids' reactions to it firsthand.

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