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BROKEN, EDEN WEST, RE-EDITED + NEW COVER
𝐑𝐄-𝐄𝐃𝐈𝐓𝐄𝐃 + NEW COVER! ❤ 🅱🆁🅾🅺🅴🅽 ❤
Finally! After a long time debating whether to give Broken a re-edit, the work is done! Huge thanks to M. for doing such an amazing job on the file.
Broken was my first book set in the Omegaverse, and back then, I wasn’t sure if I’d continue writing in this universe. It got mixed reactions—some readers absolutely loved it, while others weren’t fans of the third-person narration. In the later books, I switched to dual POV, but this story was always meant to be told in what I’d call a light POV (Aiden's). That’s just how it played out in my head. I know it’s not everyone’s favorite style, but I decided to stick with it while refining a few things.
I’ve smoothed out some parts, added a few short scenes, and included some plot tie-ins I felt were missing. I also toned down some of the heavier/more stilted writing that weighed on the story and cut a few info dumps.
Hopefully, Broken now feels more in line with my other books.
This is where the story of the eight brothers’ parents begins—this couple started it all. ❤
If you haven’t read Broken yet, I highly recommend giving it a go🥰
Here's the link to the new version (the old one is still available for a few days)
https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0F2193BH2
Finally! After a long time debating whether to give Broken a re-edit, the work is done! Huge thanks to M. for doing such an amazing job on the file.
Broken was my first book set in the Omegaverse, and back then, I wasn’t sure if I’d continue writing in this universe. It got mixed reactions—some readers absolutely loved it, while others weren’t fans of the third-person narration. In the later books, I switched to dual POV, but this story was always meant to be told in what I’d call a light POV (Aiden's). That’s just how it played out in my head. I know it’s not everyone’s favorite style, but I decided to stick with it while refining a few things.
I’ve smoothed out some parts, added a few short scenes, and included some plot tie-ins I felt were missing. I also toned down some of the heavier/more stilted writing that weighed on the story and cut a few info dumps.
Hopefully, Broken now feels more in line with my other books.
This is where the story of the eight brothers’ parents begins—this couple started it all. ❤
If you haven’t read Broken yet, I highly recommend giving it a go🥰
Here's the link to the new version (the old one is still available for a few days)
https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0F2193BH2
