Teks asli: The repast ended, Pencroft asked the reporter if he wished to accompany Herbert and himself to the forest, where they were going to try to hunt.

Terjemahan awal: Setelah selesai sarapan, Pencroft bertanya kepada si wartawan apakah dia ingin menemani Herbert dan dirinya ke hutan, tempat mereka akan mencoba berburu.

Suntingan: Seusai sarapan, Pencroft mengajak si wartawan berburu ke hutan bersamanya dan Herbert.