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There is No Silver World
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(wow! Brilliant idea! Shall I add on to it?)
(hm.... I hope you don't mind Misty! I'm going to continue with this idea!)


the aroma was sweet, like candy, but it wasn't exactly candy . . .
She was in the place of her dreams she realized.
Suddenly she saw a faded figure in the distance. She began to tense quickly. What if it was Kagen?
he had found a way through the dream, and killed them all. Since then she's realized that the dream was real, and now she was in it.
And Kagen was slowly walking towards her with his sword drawn.
And Kagen was slowly walking towards her with his sword drawn.
As Kagen came closer, she could see his evil grin printed across his face. Even though he was deathly evil, he was deathly handsome.
She was mesmerized in his narrowed eyes, and she could not leave and run away from him.
She was mesmerized in his narrowed eyes, and she could not leave and run away from him.
"Going to kill me too Kagen?" She asked calmly. She needed to get rid of her fear to show him she was strong. "Because if you kill me, there will be another heir!"

"there will always be another heir, always someone to protect the silver world!" she replied
"Not for long my dear." He purred.
"You can't do this."
"Yes I can!" He hissed.
"Yes I can!" He hissed.
but he came right back.
We danced around the room, until . . .
We danced around the room, until . . .

everyone stared at me
The bell rang, and I dashed out of the class, eager to keep away from the teacher's gaze.
Kagen had come so close . . .
Kagen had come so close . . .

I tried to weave my way through the halls, I had to find the heir NOW or else we'd all die.
She couldn't drift off today, not until she finds the heir. if she does drift into the Silver World, Kagen would kill her.
(has anyone seen that movie on ABC Family, Princess? Cause it's beginning to sould like it now. at least I think it's called Princess.)
(has anyone seen that movie on ABC Family, Princess? Cause it's beginning to sould like it now. at least I think it's called Princess.)

that was one of my many talents, being able to see peoples auras

Where would i ever find the heir though? it could be anyone
(their souls always have an opening in a living thing. it can also be used to show someones amount of life or even widen their emotion perceptions. Auras are our life force.)
(oh.)
Then suddenly, as she was searching, she was back in the Silver World.
Whenever she goes back to the Silver World, she's begun to realize that she's in a new place everytime.
(oooh, i have an idea!!!!)
Then suddenly, as she was searching, she was back in the Silver World.
Whenever she goes back to the Silver World, she's begun to realize that she's in a new place everytime.
(oooh, i have an idea!!!!)
(uh . . . i can't think of anything right now for epiphany.)
(by the way, here's my idea, what if Kagen had a brother, and he was the heir, but he didn't know it.)
(by the way, here's my idea, what if Kagen had a brother, and he was the heir, but he didn't know it.)
(epiphany is a fancy word for idea, that's all. oh.... that's a great idea!)
(yeah, but here's the cool part, he should be a twin!)
((I know!))
She glanced at her surroundings, she was in a silver aspen grove.
She glanced at her surroundings, she was in a silver aspen grove.
She began to walk up hill through the trees, and saw a castle in the distance.
A castle? She'd never seen any castle in the silver world.
She brushed her hair behind her ear, and walked towards it. It was quiet near the castle, there were no villages, it was just the castle. It looked deserted.
She tentatively walked inside the grand courtyard.
Then she walked through the grand doors, there weren't any guards around at all.
There was suddenly a giant crash from inside the castle.