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message 1: by Cale_Steps (last edited Jul 03, 2008 05:55PM) (new)

Cale_Steps | 198 comments Occasionally, a human will dream about the Silver World. It only happens once a century, but many humans have become drawn to the magical world where silver sprites gallop through the icy tundras on their silver fresian steeds. Locked into this world are many secrets that have enchanted the human mind. Once one dreams about it, they instantly become a part of it, woven into the intricate tapastry that form the thin line between fantasy, and reality.


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(wow! Brilliant idea! Shall I add on to it?)


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(hm.... I hope you don't mind Misty! I'm going to continue with this idea!)




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Cale_Steps | 198 comments (Please do:))


message 5: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) the girl woke suddenly from her dream, and sat up. she looked around and with a horrified look on her face she whispered "where am i?"


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T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) silver glistened around her, she stepped out of her bed and onto the ground, although it was ilver it felt like the softest of cottons


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the aroma was sweet, like candy, but it wasn't exactly candy . . .


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T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) there were strange creatures around, it felt like the place of her dreams


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She was in the place of her dreams she realized.


message 10: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) she was in the silver world, it was real! but why did everything seem a bit too perfect?


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Suddenly she saw a faded figure in the distance. She began to tense quickly. What if it was Kagen?


message 12: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) Kagen had destroyed her life, he was the man with the dark faeries that had killed her family


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he had found a way through the dream, and killed them all. Since then she's realized that the dream was real, and now she was in it.
And Kagen was slowly walking towards her with his sword drawn.


message 14: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) no! no! no! she thought he could not kill me! i have to get away, i am this worlds last hope!


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As Kagen came closer, she could see his evil grin printed across his face. Even though he was deathly evil, he was deathly handsome.
She was mesmerized in his narrowed eyes, and she could not leave and run away from him.


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T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) she had to snap herself out of it, but this was his deadly power


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"Going to kill me too Kagen?" She asked calmly. She needed to get rid of her fear to show him she was strong. "Because if you kill me, there will be another heir!"


message 18: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) "thats what you think." he grunted in his snarly voice

"there will always be another heir, always someone to protect the silver world!" she replied


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"Not for long my dear." He purred.


message 20: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) "what she backed away form kagen afraid of what he would do to her,"


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"You can't do this."
"Yes I can!" He hissed.


message 22: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) he lunged at me dagger in hand, i screamed and jumped to the side


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but he came right back.
We danced around the room, until . . .


message 24: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) He dissapeared, simply diassapeared and i was in the middle of my english class standing on one of my friend's desk. oh i hated it when the silver world transported me back to my own at a horrible time like this. i sat down in my desk still frightened about what Kagen had said.

everyone stared at me


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The bell rang, and I dashed out of the class, eager to keep away from the teacher's gaze.
Kagen had come so close . . .


message 26: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) he could not destroy her, she was the only one left in the long line of heirs. he had killed the rest off.


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I tried to weave my way through the halls, I had to find the heir NOW or else we'd all die.


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She couldn't drift off today, not until she finds the heir. if she does drift into the Silver World, Kagen would kill her.
(has anyone seen that movie on ABC Family, Princess? Cause it's beginning to sould like it now. at least I think it's called Princess.)


message 29: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) I knew i was not the rightful heir just one of the back of the backup one, and i really needed to find the heir it was said that he or she would have a very dark and deep purple aura.

that was one of my many talents, being able to see peoples auras


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(aura?)


message 31: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) (its like what you are, what type of person you are and stuff like that.)
Where would i ever find the heir though? it could be anyone


message 32: by [deleted user] (new)

(their souls always have an opening in a living thing. it can also be used to show someones amount of life or even widen their emotion perceptions. Auras are our life force.)


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(oh.)
Then suddenly, as she was searching, she was back in the Silver World.
Whenever she goes back to the Silver World, she's begun to realize that she's in a new place everytime.
(oooh, i have an idea!!!!)


message 34: by [deleted user] (new)

(an epiphany? What is it?)


message 35: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) ?aybe this meant something! maybe the heir wasnt in her own world but in the silver world!


message 36: by [deleted user] (new)

(uh . . . i can't think of anything right now for epiphany.)
(by the way, here's my idea, what if Kagen had a brother, and he was the heir, but he didn't know it.)


message 37: by [deleted user] (new)

(epiphany is a fancy word for idea, that's all. oh.... that's a great idea!)


message 38: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) (great idea!)


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(let's do that then!)


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(yeah, but here's the cool part, he should be a twin!)



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(oooo!)


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((I know!))
She glanced at her surroundings, she was in a silver aspen grove.


message 43: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) she had never been in this part of the world before


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She began to walk up hill through the trees, and saw a castle in the distance.


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A castle? She'd never seen any castle in the silver world.


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She brushed her hair behind her ear, and walked towards it. It was quiet near the castle, there were no villages, it was just the castle. It looked deserted.


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She tentatively walked inside the grand courtyard.


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Then she walked through the grand doors, there weren't any guards around at all.


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"Hello?" She called out.


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There was suddenly a giant crash from inside the castle.


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