BROKEN, EDEN WEST, RE-EDITED + NEW COVER
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Finally! After a long time debating whether to give Broken a re-edit, the work is done! Huge thanks to M. for doing such an amazing job on the file.
Broken was my first book set in the Omegaverse, and back then, I wasnβt sure if Iβd continue writing in this universe. It got mixed reactionsβsome readers absolutely loved it, while others werenβt fans of the third-person narration. In the later books, I switched to dual POV, but this story was always meant to be told in what Iβd call a light POV (Aiden's). Thatβs just how it played out in my head. I know itβs not everyoneβs favorite style, but I decided to stick with it while refining a few things.
Iβve smoothed out some parts, added a few short scenes, and included some plot tie-ins I felt were missing. I also toned down some of the heavier/more stilted writing that weighed on the story and cut a few info dumps.
Hopefully, Broken now feels more in line with my other books.
This is where the story of the eight brothersβ parents beginsβthis couple started it all. β€
If you havenβt read Broken yet, I highly recommend giving it a goπ₯°
Here's the link to the new version (the old one is still available for a few days)
https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0F2193BH2
Finally! After a long time debating whether to give Broken a re-edit, the work is done! Huge thanks to M. for doing such an amazing job on the file.

Broken was my first book set in the Omegaverse, and back then, I wasnβt sure if Iβd continue writing in this universe. It got mixed reactionsβsome readers absolutely loved it, while others werenβt fans of the third-person narration. In the later books, I switched to dual POV, but this story was always meant to be told in what Iβd call a light POV (Aiden's). Thatβs just how it played out in my head. I know itβs not everyoneβs favorite style, but I decided to stick with it while refining a few things.
Iβve smoothed out some parts, added a few short scenes, and included some plot tie-ins I felt were missing. I also toned down some of the heavier/more stilted writing that weighed on the story and cut a few info dumps.
Hopefully, Broken now feels more in line with my other books.
This is where the story of the eight brothersβ parents beginsβthis couple started it all. β€
If you havenβt read Broken yet, I highly recommend giving it a goπ₯°
Here's the link to the new version (the old one is still available for a few days)
https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0F2193BH2
Published on March 20, 2025 12:40
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